Physical education should be mandatory at universities.
Whether you agree or disagree with the statement made and your views.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your views.
Health exercises should made compulsory in universities. I strongly agree with this purposeful statement. As health exercises keeps our body healthy and well maintained similarly it helps in keeping the mental problems away. I would check two reasons with examples in this essay.
First of all, making health exercises compulsory in universities will improve the overall study performance of particular student. For example when I was in college there was a weekly sports exercise and my interest was to play cricket so by doing this sports exercise my overall stress of week was became negligible which helped me improve my scores and marks in another academic subjects.
Second, Personality development is the key aspect of ones’ educational qualification to further pursue in organizational offices. Making physical exercises compulsory helps grading personality development skills like communication, listening ability enhancement etc. For example when you are in a field of cricket and you are defending to another team then the communication between captain and the fielders become very important, so by doing such activities those skills of particular student improves.
Last but not the least physical education in whatever way it is always helps to keep body away from bad things like mental sufferings, stress, anxiety etc. It also helps in controlling the sugar levels, cholesterol levels and body weight control.
To end with I would say it must be done mandatory at universities to safeguards the overall academic performance of particular student and it also allows the student to pursue the necessary skills.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 300, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'become'.
Suggestion: become
... exercise my overall stress of week was became negligible which helped me improve my s...
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Line 3, column 174, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to grade' or 'grade'.
Suggestion: to grade; grade
...ing physical exercises compulsory helps grading personality development skills like com...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, similarly, so, then, well, as to, for example, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 43.0788530466 46% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 52.1666666667 65% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1384.0 1977.66487455 70% => OK
No of words: 252.0 407.700716846 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.49206349206 4.8611393121 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.48103885553 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9854037289 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 212.727598566 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.607142857143 0.524837075471 116% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 618.680645161 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.1687657098 48.9658058833 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.333333333 100.406767564 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.6045352989 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.41666666667 5.45110844103 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131103631344 0.236089414692 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0546364148831 0.076458572812 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.046403339695 0.0737576698707 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0730840691099 0.150856017488 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0429974238833 0.0645574589148 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 11.7677419355 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 58.1214874552 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.1575268817 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.56 10.9000537634 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.01818996416 111% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 86.8835125448 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
More content wanted.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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