Plants can provide food, shelter, clothing, or medicine. What is one kind of plant that is important to you or the people in your country? Use specific reasons and details to explain your choice.
It is critically vital that there is always an item with its functions allowing the residents to improve their lives or its connection to the communities' history suitable enough to represent the county. In my opinion, I believe that the tea tree is the most suitable item to represent the region I live in. I feel this way for three reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, it is noticeable that my country is located in the most favorable area for tea to survive, which is more liable for farmers to cultivate high-quality tea leaves. Tea cannot sprout in lands that will reach Frozen points or places that are too arid, which means that the location influences the quality of the condition for plant growth. For instance, the community where I lived contains several hills suitable for tea leaves to grow with the humidity and provides the most comfortable environment for the plant. Tea will always come to their mind when people think of our country.
In addition, there is no denying that there is a long history of the origin of the tea that traced back from my country, which plays a critical role in our economy. A long time ago, an emperor of the region discovered tea as a warm breeze that blew several leaves in the pot that he was boiling water and provided an unforgettable scent and transformed the water into brown color. By the way of illustration, my country has relied on them on the international market for several centuries, which strengthens the connection of the plant and the people's incomes.
Last on the contrary not least, there is no denying that tea connects the family and expands the connection to the whole community. Since the only method to make a great country is to chain the people's hearts with their environment. To cite an instance, family members or neighbors might visit people and drink tea while chatting, which emphasizes the importance of tea in my country.
In conclusion, I intensively believe that tea plays a vital role in my country since it contains a historical origin in the region and chains the economy where I lived, which is the most iconic element to represent my living environment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 143, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'communities'' or 'community's'?
Suggestion: communities'; community's
...ve their lives or its connection to the communities history suitable enough to represent th...
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Line 7, column 133, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... the connection to the whole community. Since the only method to make a great country...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, then, while, for instance, i feel, in addition, in conclusion, by the way, in my opinion, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 22.0 11.0286738351 199% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1805.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 378.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77513227513 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40933352052 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64175528243 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.489417989418 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 561.6 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.2807968561 48.9658058833 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.928571429 100.406767564 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 20.6045352989 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.85714285714 5.45110844103 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0684259471596 0.236089414692 29% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0286677171734 0.076458572812 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0301390141701 0.0737576698707 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0395826593934 0.150856017488 26% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.025479994232 0.0645574589148 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 11.7677419355 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.1575268817 124% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.74 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 86.8835125448 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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