Question: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
One of the attributes for the development of a strong relationship is the truth. Some people think that always telling the truth is very important in a relationship. On the other hand, I believe that hiding the truth from your partner for his benefit is acceptable.
To begin with, no one can deny the fact that the truth and honesty are fundamental characteristics of a good relationship. I agree with this but if there is some wisdom in hiding the truth then it is acceptable. If I have to choose telling a lie for the betterment of my loved ones, I will definitely go with this. For example, my husband loves physical activities. We always go for cycling on weekends. Last month his friend told him about a cycling competition. He decided to participate in the competition. I knew that he is not very good to win a cycling competition, but I always encouraged him that he is very good in this activity and he will definitely win that competition. This thing motivated him so much, and he started to do more practice. In the competition, he did not win but he ended up as a third runner up. This is due to his hard work and motivation, which he got from my words. So telling the truth for the betterment of others is fine for me.
Secondly, sometimes we hurt others by telling them the truth. This can spoil our relationship. My friend’s example is here. Elisa was a very good friend of mine when I was in college. One day she had a new hairstyle. She came to me and asked about her hairstyle. I told her bluntly that I did not like her new hair, and did not suit on her. This truth hurt her feelings because she was very excited for her new hair. At that time she went back sadly. After that, I realized that I might hurt her feelings and this thing will affect our friendship. If I just said to her that your hair are fine instead of telling her the truth, she was not get so much upset. This example demonstrates that sometimes telling the truth can hurt others’
In conclusion, I firmly agree that it is acceptable to tell a lie to your loved ones in a relationship for their betterment and can prevent us from hurting their feelings.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 233, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to tell'.
Suggestion: to tell
...n it is acceptable. If I have to choose telling a lie for the betterment of my loved on...
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Line 3, column 735, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...times telling the truth can hurt others’ In conclusion, I firmly agree that it is...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, second, secondly, so, then, third, for example, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 78.0 43.0788530466 181% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1532.0 1977.66487455 77% => OK
No of words: 352.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.35227272727 4.8611393121 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67552709722 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.480113636364 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 475.2 618.680645161 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 9.59856630824 188% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.8443531366 48.9658058833 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.8333333333 100.406767564 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6666666667 20.6045352989 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.54166666667 5.45110844103 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149658625621 0.236089414692 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0466827236303 0.076458572812 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0486807657361 0.0737576698707 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113041487669 0.150856017488 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0241596654072 0.0645574589148 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.4 11.7677419355 54% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 58.1214874552 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 10.1575268817 51% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.36 10.9000537634 68% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.8 8.01818996416 85% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 86.8835125448 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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