The question of whether children should choose a job which is pertinent to their parent's job or not has been debated for many years. I adhere to the idea that they should choose an occupation which is similar and related to their parents' vocation. In this follows, two conspicuous reasons will vindicate my standpoint.
To begin with, of course there are some who argue that children should find new job which is not similar to parents vocation because they can be more successful without any ones' help. I feel this is a miss-guiding idea. Since the dawn of civilization people living together and need each other's help to survive and also finding occupation. Our parents having some friends and coworkers who can aid us to easily employed in where they are working. My friends' experience is a good example for what I mean. My friends' father having automobile plant which is very famous in my country.
His father was always told him that just study mechanic in university until you can easily employ in may factory. He obeyed from father advise and now he worked in his father planted as his father planed.
Furthermore, In the modern era humans using their advice for being successful in this chaotic world. I subscribe to the idea that since our parents having a lot experience they can help us a lot in occupation which is related to them. If choose the vocation which is similar to their job, we are able to use their advice. I think my own experiment is a compelling instance for illuminating my statement. I was working in fathers office and there was a problem which looks inexplicable for me, but since my vocation was similar to my father, he helped me to solve that. Indeed using our parent's knowledge in jobs which is pertinent to them is another advantages of choosing similar job.
In conclusion, I am of the opinion that we should choose jobs which are related to our parents. This is because they can help us to employ easily, and also we can use their experience to solve the problems we faced with.
The question of whether children should choose a job which is pertinent to their parent's job or not has been debated for many years. I adhere to the idea that they should choose an occupation which is similar and related to their parents' vocation. In this follows, two conspicuous reasons will vindicate my standpoint.
To begin with, of course there are some who argue that children should find new job which is not similar to parents vocation because they can be more successful without any ones' help. I feel this is a miss-guiding idea. Since the dawn of civilization people living together and need each other's help to survive and also finding occupation. Our parents having some friends and coworkers who can aid us to easily employed in where they are working. My friends' experience is a good example for what I mean. My friends' father having automobile plant which is very famous in my country.
His father was always told him that just study mechanic in university until you can easily employ in may factory. He obeyed from father advise and now he worked in his father planted as his father planed.
Furthermore, In the modern era humans using their advice for being successful in this chaotic world. I subscribe to the idea that since our parents having a lot experience they can help us a lot in occupation which is related to them. If choose the vocation which is similar to their job, we are able to use their advice. I think my own experiment is a compelling instance for illuminating my statement. I was working in fathers office and there was a problem which looks inexplicable for me, but since my vocation was similar to my father, he helped me to solve that. Indeed using our parent's knowledge in jobs which is pertinent to them is another advantages of choosing similar job.
In conclusion, I am of the opinion that we should choose jobs which are related to our parents. This is because they can help us to employ easily, and also we can use their experience to solve the problems we faced with.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHETHER[3]
Message: Wordiness: Shorten this phrase to the shortest possible suggestion.
Suggestion: Whether; The question whether
The question of whether children should choose a job which is p...
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Line 4, column 569, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Indeed,
... my father, he helped me to solve that. Indeed using our parents knowledge in jobs whi...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, look, may, so, i feel, i mean, i think, in conclusion, of course, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 59.0 43.0788530466 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1666.0 1977.66487455 84% => OK
No of words: 357.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66666666667 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53070032414 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.501400560224 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 523.8 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.4115551037 48.9658058833 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.6842105263 100.406767564 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7894736842 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.63157894737 5.45110844103 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.485338804437 0.236089414692 206% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.165930084128 0.076458572812 217% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.198744883107 0.0737576698707 269% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.303235710863 0.150856017488 201% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.262935300464 0.0645574589148 407% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 11.7677419355 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 86.8835125448 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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