Question :Workers are more satisfied when they have many different types of tasks to do during the workday than when they do similar tasks all day long. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
People have a differing views regard to the how many tasks should be done at the work. While some argue that doing one task is more pleasure, I disagree with this idea and believe that doing various tasks during the workday is more satisfying.
The first reason is that doing different tasks at work give rise to progress more quickly in many aspects. Nowadays, job market is becoming increasingly competitive, and many applicants are applying for various job positions. In this way, workers have to be able to do various tasks during their work hours if they wish to remain successful in their chosen profession. One negative consequence of this is, for example, when a worker is unable to do given add tasks, it is likely to lose his job. There are many positive consequences on the other hand, people who are able to do many types of tasks not only have a chance to gain real experiences and learn practical skills in their jobs, but also lead to promotions and a successful career in the futures. From a personal perspective, this will result is better salaries and career progression as well as high quality of life.
However, some employees believe that doing same tasks during the workday is both straightforward and satisfying activity, But I think this is a shortsighted view because this inspire other workers that working hard in not necessary. In addition, Workers who do similar tasks in their time of work are often bored and will be demotivate to work hard and derive their companies' goal successfully. For example, mining industary require high level of knowledge and expertise. In my case, it took me around two years before I be become competent and well-qualified worker in this field by only learning different skills and working hard to develop my talent in many aspects, but now I enjoy it much more than when I did tun only on task in early years of work. As a result, doing many tasks at work give us more pleasure when we reach a high level of performance because the results are better and the feeling of achievements are greater.
In conclusion, I strongly support the idea that workers when have many different tasks are more happier than those who do only similar tasks. Also, it leads more progress in the life and career.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'view'?
Suggestion: view
People have a differing views regard to the how many tasks should be ...
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Line 1, column 41, Rule ID: THE_HOW[1]
Message: Did you mean 'how'?
Suggestion: how
...People have a differing views regard to the how many tasks should be done at the work. ...
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Line 8, column 67, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...support the idea that workers when have many different tasks are more happier than those who d...
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Line 8, column 92, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'happier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: happier
...kers when have many different tasks are more happier than those who do only similar tasks. A...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, well, while, for example, i think, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1873.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 393.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76590330789 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45244063426 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61640966179 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.506361323155 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 586.8 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.7296372708 48.9658058833 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.866666667 100.406767564 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.2 20.6045352989 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.33333333333 5.45110844103 171% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.366535852108 0.236089414692 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13166987957 0.076458572812 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0946143798896 0.0737576698707 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.266359657263 0.150856017488 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0355568088956 0.0645574589148 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 11.7677419355 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 86.8835125448 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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