quickly changing world makes people happier or not
When adressing the rapid pace in which the world is changing, and how it influences people' happiness and satisfaction with their lives, there are several factors to consider. Surely, a millenial cannot be compared to a seventy years old man who has lived through wars, evolutions, and even an era without computers. All that said, I generally disagree with the statement, and I believe people are happier and more satisfied with their lives in world that is changing very fast. I will demostrate my ideas as follows.
Firstly, I believe the most influential phenomenon that distinguishes our time from the past is "technology". Technology is the responsible party for a world changing so rapidly, and I am geniunely grateful. Technology has made our lives easier in innumerable ways. Anything a person desires, any kind of knowledge one needs to obtain, is just a click away. Let us remember all the service that is provided for us by technology and internet such as online shopping, different applications to get a taxi or rent a car, online classes, online reviews about almost everything, social media, and many others. I believe less time spent on the activities that are not productive and just time consuming leads to happier individuals today.
Secondly, technology provides a vast range of opportunities for people to find themselves, grow their businesses, learn and modify their skill sets and so on. Moreover,The far most astonishing quality of the era of technology is that it is not biased and it does not account people for their privileges. A teenager living in a poor country has the opportunity to attend the same classes online as american teenagers, have the same social media, and learn about all people from around the world and their cultures. Althogh it is not a solution to social injustice and there is still a long road ahead, it is definitely a start. On the other hand, technology has made social awareness and knowledge available all around the world, and therefore it can be the beggining to end illiteracy.
Finally, change equals challenge in my mind. When an environment is facing new challenges it starts to change. It is similar to evolution in biology. We may illustrate that all species have been changing and modifying through time to make them more self sufficient and proficient to survive. Subsequently, I believe that the world is changing so fast because people now have high demands and they are fighting for their happiness; Thus, changing very quickly themselves and the world around them.
In conclusion, in my opinion the fast alternating universe we live in today contributes to people's happiness on the basis that technology provides opportunities to make life easier and more socially fair,and it provides knowledge all aroud the world. Also, people today know what makes them happy and successful and they have the equipment to obtain it, forcing the world to change quickly.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
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| 2022-04-10 | Seyed Armin Mirhosseini | 90 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, thus, in conclusion, kind of, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 26.0 13.8261648746 188% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2465.0 1977.66487455 125% => OK
No of words: 485.0 407.700716846 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0824742268 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.69283662038 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.935320763 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 258.0 212.727598566 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.531958762887 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 781.2 618.680645161 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 8.0 1.86738351254 428% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.8108434219 48.9658058833 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.045454545 100.406767564 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0454545455 20.6045352989 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.54545454545 5.45110844103 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.312961576269 0.236089414692 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0768085612666 0.076458572812 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0894334867458 0.0737576698707 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17750989192 0.150856017488 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0852619700829 0.0645574589148 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 11.7677419355 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 10.9000537634 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 122.0 86.8835125448 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.