Read and think about the following statement: The college years are the best time in a person’s life. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons to support your opinion.
Although students may struggle with some difficulties and challenges in their college years, I do agree the college years are the best time in one's life. Some reason convince me for having this opinion.
In the first place, I think colleges are as an entrance for achieving a bright future because we learn many new skills and new knowledge and gain new experience that help us toward our goal after graduation. Colleges prepare the ground in which students can choose a field that they are interested in and they can select a good adviser to help them.
The second reason is that, these years improve our social skills. We can find new friends to communicate with them that they are almost as the same age as we are and maybe some of them are from different cultures and languages. Communication with student from all over the country and even from other countries can be an advantage for us so that we can learn about their cultures. There are so many groups and associations that we can participate at their activities and enjoy them for free. For example when I was in the college I was attending the dance clubs that is very delightful for me and now I can do Salsa dance very well. Also sometimes, I was going camping with my college friend and it was so fun.
Furthermore, we may be away from parents in college years for probably the first time ever. So we have to learn to get control over our life and accept responsibilities that these features are good practices for future life.
In conclusion, from my point of view, the college years are definitely the most memorable time in a person's life in order to reach brilliant future, having fun, and taking on own responsibility.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
... the college years are the best time in ones life. Some reason convince me for havin...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...on. Colleges prepare the ground in which students can choose a field that they ar...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...and now I can do Salsa dance very well. Also sometimes, I was going camping with my ...
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Line 7, column 76, Rule ID: FIRST_TIME_EVER[1]
Message: Use simply 'first time'.
Suggestion: first time
...rents in college years for probably the first time ever. So we have to learn to get control ove...
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Line 9, column 101, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...definitely the most memorable time in a persons life in order to reach brilliant future...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, may, second, so, well, for example, i think, in conclusion, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 52.1666666667 63% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1399.0 1977.66487455 71% => OK
No of words: 301.0 407.700716846 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64784053156 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58448700386 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 212.727598566 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.531561461794 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 618.680645161 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.3274938497 48.9658058833 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.615384615 100.406767564 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1538461538 20.6045352989 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.30769230769 5.45110844103 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168319606731 0.236089414692 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0692492483648 0.076458572812 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0617685608362 0.0737576698707 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11782282142 0.150856017488 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0815476711854 0.0645574589148 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 11.7677419355 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.99 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 86.8835125448 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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