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Schools should ask students to evaluate their teachers. Do you agree or disagree? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

In many societies, giving feedback to a person older than you are considered unethical. Having grown in such societies students fail to evaluate their teachers. However, the evaluation of teachers by a student is something crucial because it allows the teacher to know areas where he or she can improve, creates a good teacher-student relationship, and maximize the students' performance.  Firstly, evaluation from students can help the teacher to improve his effectiveness in teaching. Students are the best people who can evaluate teachers, for they are the ones who are affected by the teacher's teaching style; therefore, they are able to provide positive feedbacks basing on what they have experienced. To illustrate, my former school had a good culture of providing some time for students to evaluate their teachers. This would always impact teachers positively because they would know what exactly they need to do so that their lesson can be well understood. It is therefore very good for teachers to be evaluated by students. In addition, through evaluation students creates a good relationship with their teacher. It is only when a person shows you his or her concern in making a positive impact in your life that you start admiring them. When requesting feedbacks teachers are showing the students that they care about them. This encourages them to work even harder not only to succeed but also to please their teacher who is also their friend.   Lastly, the evaluation of teachers can lead to an increase in the students' performance.  Students' performance is highly affected by their teachers. Thus, when students get to tell the teacher what they think he or she can do to help them, it can be very fruitful. For instance, When our physics teacher in grade 12 asked for the feedback, we told him that he does not go in deep on a topic which created confusion in us. Afterward, he would always provide enough information on each topic, and our physics grades improved drastically. That being said teacher's evaluation is the key to students' success.   To sum up, students should evaluate their teachers because it will not only  benefit the students themselse but also the teacher as it will allow teachers to improve their teaching style, will enhance the student-teacher relationship, and will maximize the students' performance.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 764, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'students'' or 'student's'?
Suggestion: students'; student's
...-student relationship, and maximize the students performance.

^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 2307, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...your life that you start admiring them. When requesting feedbacks teachers are showi...
^^^^
Line 1, column 2922, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'students'' or 'student's'?
Suggestion: students'; student's
...teachers can lead to an increase in the students performance. Students performance...
^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 3954, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...se but also the teacher as it will allow teachers to improve their teaching style...
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Line 1, column 4067, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'students'' or 'student's'?
Suggestion: students'; student's
...her relationship, and will maximize the students performance.

^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, lastly, so, therefore, thus, well, for instance, in addition, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 43.0788530466 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3955.0 1977.66487455 200% => OK
No of words: 500.0 407.700716846 123% => OK
Chars per words: 7.91 4.8611393121 163% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.72870804502 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 9.86847424884 2.67179642975 369% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 217.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.434 0.524837075471 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1000.8 618.680645161 162% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.0 1.51630824373 132% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 20.1344086022 174% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 286.390458811 48.9658058833 585% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 282.5 100.406767564 281% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 35.7142857143 20.6045352989 173% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.92857142857 5.45110844103 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.53405017921 22% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.094005678403 0.236089414692 40% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0665165095614 0.076458572812 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0538696460409 0.0737576698707 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.094005678403 0.150856017488 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 33.7 11.7677419355 286% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 2.11 58.1214874552 4% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 6.10430107527 260% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 21.7 10.1575268817 214% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 29.19 10.9000537634 268% => Coleman_liau_index is high.
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 86.8835125448 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 25.5 10.002688172 255% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.0537634409 159% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.247311828 156% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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