A short, type written, couple of paragraphs about the artist you want to write your analysis paper on. Why do you think this artist/artwork is important? 500-1000 words Must bring into class (see announcements for further instructions)
To start with, my analysis introduces why I select this picture and what do you think about this photograph. I think that I didn't live in this age and didn't go through this period, but photographs and other works of art, one can imagine how much people suffered during this period, including the pain, sadness, and suffering from poverty, as they indirectly experienced the past because I believe that the present can be seen in the past, and we are aware that these times can be repeated during the development of our society in the future But I cannot expect this tragedy should be repeated so, we need to have more interest in poverty problems. Also, I was analyzed with color, shape, line, movement, use of light and dark, patterns, It appears that this peace color is black and white but it seems a little red, this photograph shows one people on the bed, and he looks like poor and the bed is made by wine container and blanket and wood board, wood walls and the brick walls are mainly made up of straight lines, two wine containers are shaped by circle, man Lie down on the bed, but he usually looks front and photograph color usually show night light because It is basically a black-and-white photograph, Black or while color repeated in the picture and Poor guys are on the top. Bricks are repeatedly on the photograph. Many of the material is crude. Furthermore, I described Subject, Meaning, Symbolic/Psychological, biographical, social/political, the piece shows a real and realistic depiction of the subject of poverty, which was previously dealt with in the art community. The man is shivering by cold winters, and he just has a barren furniture, it shows that poor man makes barren furniture, and he looks dirty So, it can assume, many of the poor people were suffering by economic aspects because the man is living a poor life and is most likely a low-income worker working in a factory or farm but these low-quality workers were suffering from poverty. Perhaps he lived a poor life now and suffered from life This period developed industrialization and many people came to the city to get a job because Industrially developed this period and many workers work hard, but they could not escape from poverty. Political: In the early days of the industrial age, the labor system was not as good as it is today So, people were underpaid and the environment was worse than it is now, but many of Protestants came to America for religious freedom because the United Kingdom persecuted many of them. Lastly, the artists described the pain and sorrow of the poor in the United States Especially, but Jacob rills depicted poverty in pictures, but the photographer showed all the pain and sorrow of poverty and contributed to letting people know because he would like to remind tragedy of poor for people So, he created this work to portray the social realities and the poverty of society at the time and to illustrate the social poor. To sum up, it is my thought that my analysis paper has been precisely delivered with the reasons mentioned above.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, lastly, look, so, while, i think, to start with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 15.1003584229 172% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 39.0 13.8261648746 282% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 52.1666666667 125% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2530.0 1977.66487455 128% => OK
No of words: 532.0 407.700716846 130% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75563909774 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.80261649409 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74931060488 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 264.0 212.727598566 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.496240601504 0.524837075471 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 804.6 618.680645161 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 11.0 1.86738351254 589% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.6003584229 53% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 48.0 20.1344086022 238% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 193.094333132 48.9658058833 394% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 230.0 100.406767564 229% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 48.3636363636 20.6045352989 235% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 7.81818181818 5.45110844103 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.53405017921 22% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 11.8709677419 17% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0725734130031 0.236089414692 31% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0362158237256 0.076458572812 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0602779833316 0.0737576698707 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0725734130031 0.150856017488 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 25.2 11.7677419355 214% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 31.22 58.1214874552 54% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.8 10.1575268817 205% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.22 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.01818996416 113% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 86.8835125448 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.0 10.002688172 280% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 21.2 10.0537634409 211% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 21.0 10.247311828 205% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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