Should university give financial support to sports and social activities or to the classes and library?
I disagree strongly with the idea that the same amount of
money should go to university sports activities as to university
libraries. Although playing sports is a wonderful
way to learn about teamwork, strategy and reaching your
goals, it should not be the principal focus of a university
education.
students need the most up-to-date library facilities available
to get the best education. Many of those facilities are
very expensive to buy and maintain. These include computerized
programs and access to Internet research databases
that students can use to find information all around
the world. if a university is only offering its students resources
of a decade ago, it's depriving those students of a
tremendous amount of information.
Even the book and magazine budget of universities has
gone up tremendously in the last decade. More is being
published on every subject, and every university wants to
have this information available to its students.
it also costs money for universities to keep their libraries
open. students need to have access to all the libraries`
research tools as much of the time as possible. Because
students are young and can stay up all night studying,
many universities are starting to leave their libraries open
all night during exam periods. this costs money, because
the staff has to be paid extra to be there. it also costs
money to run the building (electricity, heat) during that
time.
students at universities are only going to benefit from
their education if they can get to all the tools they need
to learn. sports are secondary to the resources that students
need from university libraries. For this reason, libraries
should always be better funded than sports activities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, second, so, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 43.0788530466 53% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1499.0 1977.66487455 76% => OK
No of words: 280.0 407.700716846 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35357142857 4.8611393121 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.48103885553 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88104068145 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 212.727598566 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.532142857143 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 618.680645161 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.9753695961 48.9658058833 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.6875 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.6875 5.45110844103 31% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 30.0 4.53405017921 662% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196031893168 0.236089414692 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0704021256401 0.076458572812 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0680203008898 0.0737576698707 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0530111420032 0.150856017488 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0789502714608 0.0645574589148 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 11.7677419355 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.45 10.9000537634 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 86.8835125448 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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