Small crimes deserve community service instead of time in prison.
The way that society punish people who have commited small crimes has become a major issue which frequently generates a big deal of heated debate, with supporters claiming that convicts have to spend time on prison while opponents state that community service is enough to rehabilitate. In my opinion, citizens that have done a small crime should do community service. The reasons for my belief are economic, philosophic and personal.
First of all, community service saves money. The citizens who have committed a crime will be living in their own place. Furthermore, they will have to use public transportation and spend the day working on something that it will improve the community. In contrast, prisoners sleep and eat on the prison. They do not do anything besides that and the society will have to maintain them. In addition, they do not work as they are not allow to leave and this clearly does not help to grow the economy.
Secondly, from a philosophical point of view, community service allows convicts to give back to society. If the person who has committed a crime is able to understand and fix it, the individual will be able to make up the situation for the offense done. For example, someone who has made a graffiti on the wall should not go to prison. Instead, the society should give that person the possibility to understand from the mistake done and provide the opportunity to solve the problem like painting walls.
Personally, I think that community service helps convicted to have an efficient rehabilitation. Prisons can be very hard to transit. There are several movies and documentaries that illustrate how prisons can affect a person’s mental health. In my view, community service provides a safe environment where a person can really understand and fix what have done. Moreover, the prison alienates an individual from society.
In conclusion, I strongly agree that citizens who have committed small crimes should do community service instead of going to prison. This is because community service saves money, it helps a people to make up for their offenses and provides a safe environment for rehabilitation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 431, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'allowed'.
Suggestion: allowed
...ition, they do not work as they are not allow to leave and this clearly does not help...
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Line 2, column 437, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'leaving'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'allow' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: leaving
... they do not work as they are not allow to leave and this clearly does not help to grow ...
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Line 3, column 288, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a graffito' or simply 'graffiti'?
Suggestion: a graffito; graffiti
...done. For example, someone who has made a graffiti on the wall should not go to prison. In...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, furthermore, if, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, while, for example, i think, in addition, in conclusion, in contrast, first of all, in my opinion, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1796.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 355.0 407.700716846 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05915492958 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82775935533 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.498591549296 0.524837075471 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 582.3 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 54.6639506439 48.9658058833 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.8 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.75 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.1 5.45110844103 167% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.317614370921 0.236089414692 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0988774746281 0.076458572812 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0910757962003 0.0737576698707 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195774085767 0.150856017488 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0789508616046 0.0645574589148 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 11.7677419355 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 86.8835125448 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.