Snap judgments can never be trusted. Do you agree or disagree with the statement? Use reasons and examples to support your opinion.
In reality, not matter what kind of people and no matter when, we are certainly faced various decisions to make, such as marriage and other significant others. If we make personal decisions casually, they will lead to devastating outcome. Therefore, snap judgment cannot be trusted.
For doctors, making important decisions lightly will cause patent’s death. In fact, the decision made by doctors is extremely important and crucial for both doctors and patents. That is one essential reason that only students trained a long time can they become doctors. They take great responsibility of patents. If they think decisions lightly, they cannot make up the serious results. Almost every countries, there are many cases that many patents dead result from the snap judgment made by doctors. If every doctor attach importance to make decisions , they can reduce the chances of unnecessary death of patents.
For businessmen, snap judgment causes unexpected lose. Businessmen’s decisions not only involve money but also cooperation and other important elements of business. For example, once a time my father did not collected relative information to help him access the chances of the success of one project but to his experience. As a result, he make a severe mistake and causes losing ten million yuan lost and therefore was fired by his boss. Obviously, making decisions without thinking leads company to lose much.
For the public, if we could not take as many factors as possible into account, we would regret and live in a unfortunate life. Certainly, we have to make a variety of decisions in our life, such as marriage and jobs. For example, my friend just met his wife three weeks and then decided to get married. As the beginning, the couple lead a happy life. Gradually, as knowing each other more, they had conflicts and even fights. Recently, they have planned to get a divorce and my friend’s life mess up. Everyone is supposed to be responsible to themselves. The best way to avoid some mistakes is to think highly and fully of decisions-making, especially significant ones.
In a word, we cannot make personal decisions without thinking, which may cause the bad outcome and thus do harm to others. If other people make snap judgment, we cannot be trust and fully conduct them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 559, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ctor attach importance to make decisions , they can reduce the chances of unnecess...
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Line 3, column 213, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'collect'
Suggestion: collect
... example, once a time my father did not collected relative information to help him access...
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Line 3, column 344, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'makes'.
Suggestion: makes
... but to his experience. As a result, he make a severe mistake and causes losing ten ...
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Line 4, column 108, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...to account, we would regret and live in a unfortunate life. Certainly, we have to...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, then, therefore, thus, for example, in fact, kind of, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1931.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 379.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09498680739 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41224685777 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80790706849 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572559366755 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 603.9 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.51792114695 227% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.6398230084 48.9658058833 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.24 100.406767564 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.16 20.6045352989 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.92 5.45110844103 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 14.0 3.85842293907 363% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0750316994006 0.236089414692 32% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0290313156458 0.076458572812 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0567774531578 0.0737576698707 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0514970127131 0.150856017488 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0293087188183 0.0645574589148 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 11.7677419355 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.65 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 86.8835125448 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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