some employees who prefer a four-day workweek instead of the traditional five-day workweek
In the United States, there is a growing trend among some employees who prefer a four-day workweek instead of the traditional five-day workweek. Proponents argue that this shift would result in fewer overworked and error-prone employees, ultimately leading to increased company profits. With the extra resources, companies would also have the ability to allocate more funds towards employee health benefits. However, there are certain considerations to be made in implementing this change.
One of the primary concerns is the need for companies to hire additional employees to maintain productivity levels. Hiring more employees would necessitate additional office space and computers, resulting in increased costs for the company. Moreover, the process of recruiting and training new employees also incurs extra expenses. On the flip side, this move could contribute to a reduction in the unemployment rate, which is advantageous for the country as a whole.
From the employees' perspective, a four-day workweek provides an attractive option for those seeking a better work-life balance. By trading in the potential for higher salaries, individuals gain the opportunity to spend more quality time with their families and engage in other recreational activities. However, there are concerns regarding the impact on job stability and career advancement. Reducing work hours might affect job security and limit the prospects for promotions within companies.
In conclusion, while a four-day workweek offers benefits such as improved employee well-being and potentially higher company profits, there are significant considerations to evaluate. Companies must weigh the costs of hiring additional staff and the potential impact on job stability. Employees need to assess the trade-offs between more leisure time and potential limitations on career growth. Striking a balance between these factors is crucial in determining the viability and success of transitioning to a shorter workweek.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 10, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'employees'' or 'employee's'?
Suggestion: employees'; employee's
...for the country as a whole. From the employees perspective, a four-day workweek provid...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, well, while, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 43.0788530466 16% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1701.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 292.0 407.700716846 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.82534246575 4.8611393121 120% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04723517973 2.67179642975 114% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602739726027 0.524837075471 115% => OK
syllable_count: 522.9 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.51630824373 119% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.59856630824 10% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.7876293294 48.9658058833 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 106.3125 100.406767564 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.25 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.25 5.45110844103 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.312557491715 0.236089414692 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0942283269541 0.076458572812 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.1926723249 0.0737576698707 261% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182129265771 0.150856017488 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.130232658584 0.0645574589148 202% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 11.7677419355 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 58.1214874552 62% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.1575268817 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.53 10.9000537634 152% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.26 8.01818996416 128% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 86.8835125448 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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