Some items (such as clothes or furniture) can be made by hand or by machine. Which do you prefer: items made by hand or items made by machine? Use reasons and specific examples to explain your choice.
Throughout my lifetime my observation summarized that, In most accession handmade items are highly respected among people, than machine made one. This maybe the reason why handmade items such as clothes and furniture are comparatively expensive in market. It is specially made for individual desire and imagination, however, personally, in my opinion, I always prefer machine made or factory manufactured products such as clothes, devices and furniture for some reason. I would like to support my view providing three reason without any doubt.
First of all, I would like to highlight my idea with case of manufacturing clothes. Some may say that handmade clothes are fancy, chic and valuable due to it producing method-especially made for individual. Even though, clothes are clothes, whether it is made by machine or human, the origin of the clothes are made to cover our naked body and prevent losing our body heat. For example, in cold winter day, to protect our body with we choose to wear clothes that can warm our body. For this reason, choosing hand or machine made is not big difference as long as we felt comfortable with it. Hence, I would like say that as long as machine made clothes are accomplishes its role the is no need to buy expensive handmade one.
Secondly, furniture is my next example to support my idea that machine is better. Machine does have special configuration to perform command as it given. Because of this setting the machine have a better ability to cut, arranging and painting in exact geometrical shapes when it receives command. For the consequences, machine made furniture will become perfect shaped and glass like textured painting that can fulfill our satisfaction. About handmade, to make exact measurement, it will require experiences and knowledge plus expert labor to make exact same as machine made. For instance, to create complicated creature with different angles and shapes, the producing duration will be way to different in hand and machine.
Last but not least, for the manufacturer, machine made will definitely require less time, intelligent and failure. Once the machine is installed in exact setting, it will produce hundreds and thousands of product in less time with perfect result. Comparing to this example, at same amount of time, sole labor will produce less quantity than machine. Not only quantity is issue but also every product will be different in some way, the existence of exact same product never will be produced.
In conclusion, whenever I have got asked by choosing handmade or machine made, it would definitely choose machine made for the reason mentioned in above. Advantages of machine is cheaper, perfect and constant which is three essential things that consumer wants.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 94, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'saith', 'says'.
Suggestion: saith; says
...case of manufacturing clothes. Some may say that handmade clothes are fancy, chic a...
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Line 3, column 509, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to hand'
Suggestion: to hand
...arm our body. For this reason, choosing hand or machine made is not big difference a...
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Line 7, column 468, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[7]
Message: The adverb 'never' is usually put between 'will' and 'be'.
Suggestion: will never be
...ay, the existence of exact same product never will be produced. In conclusion, whenever I ...
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Line 9, column 107, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to machine'
Suggestion: to machine
...achine made, it would definitely choose machine made for the reason mentioned in above....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2311.0 1977.66487455 117% => OK
No of words: 449.0 407.700716846 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14699331849 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60321845022 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74742524818 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 212.727598566 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.505567928731 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 753.3 618.680645161 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.94265232975 223% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.4708706076 48.9658058833 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.045454545 100.406767564 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4090909091 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 5.45110844103 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.312422537294 0.236089414692 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0905077120156 0.076458572812 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0631520303429 0.0737576698707 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175289338711 0.150856017488 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0660512510755 0.0645574589148 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 58.1214874552 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 10.9000537634 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 86.8835125448 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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