Some parents are very involved in their students academic lives,helping with homework, talking with teachers, and volunteering at school. Other parents choose to take a lesser role in their students academic programs. Do you prefer for your parents to be more involved in your schooling or less?use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.?
Parents and tutors are the have an important role in shaping the future of a child. Some parents do not get involved in their child’s school activities while other parent do involve attentively. In my opinion, I would prefer my parents to engage in my schooling activities. This is due to the fact that parents can enhance the confidence of their children, find out their behavioural pattern, and can provide individual care.
Parents can boosts a child’s dream and motivate him to attain that. They can talk and find out the child’s ambition and sport activities and help him by providing the necessary coaching required. For instance, if a child loves to play football a parent can take him to coaching classes so that he can get better trained. Similarly, if the kid is interested to become an astronaut the parent can motivate by helping in his small experiments.Thus, by encouragement in every step a child does will enhance their development.
Furthermore, meeting the tutor can help the parents understand their child better. The teachers can monitor the behaviour of the students and their relationship with peers. All kids are different a teacher can identify the students physical and mental aspects outside the house which she reports to the parent during the school meets. This will help the parents to recognise their child better. For instance, a teacher who recognises the behavioural abnormality a student can share it with the parents. The parents would then give special attention to rectify their child’s behavioural problem either by advisor or by a child counsellor. This would definitely bring a change in the child’s upbringing and help him to solve his problems.
Nowadays the bond of parents and their children are slowly moving apart due to the busy work schedule of the former. Spending time and enjoying with their kids can be an efficient way to relieve their work related stress. Moreover, this will enhance their child-parent relationship in a healthier way. Every child wants listening ears and parents who takes care of this will help them in moulding their character to a great extend. Eventually, the quality of life and the productivity will increase for both of them.
To conclude, parents should allocate more time for their kids and enjoy with them by taking part in school activities. This would positively result in a change in both childs as well as parents life.
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furthermore, if, moreover, similarly, so, then, thus, well, while, for instance, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 22.0 9.8082437276 224% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2046.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 401.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10224438903 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47492842339 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82926470598 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 212.727598566 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.503740648379 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 611.1 618.680645161 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.1357089348 48.9658058833 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.0 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2272727273 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.81818181818 5.45110844103 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.331960287093 0.236089414692 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121729354959 0.076458572812 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0654679692118 0.0737576698707 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.220729617768 0.150856017488 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0579959246972 0.0645574589148 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 10.9000537634 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 86.8835125448 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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