Some parents rarely have full time to take care of their preschool children. They have two options: a child-care center, where children will be cared for together; or an individual caregiver, where the child will taken care of alone. Which one do you thin

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Some parents rarely have full time to take care of their preschool children. They have two options: a child-care center, where children will be cared for together; or an individual caregiver, where the child will taken care of alone. Which one do you think is better?

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 247, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... care center or an individual caregiver, but, which one is better? That is a ques...
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Line 5, column 629, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: an
...have peers around him or her, and lacks an an opportunity to experience interpersonal...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 629, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'an' or 'an' is left.
Suggestion: an; an
...have peers around him or her, and lacks an an opportunity to experience interpersonal...
^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, at least, in conclusion, in contrast, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 23.0 9.8082437276 234% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 26.0 13.8261648746 188% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 43.0788530466 53% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2736.0 1977.66487455 138% => OK
No of words: 532.0 407.700716846 130% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14285714286 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.80261649409 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94641583022 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 245.0 212.727598566 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.460526315789 0.524837075471 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 874.8 618.680645161 141% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 9.0 3.08781362007 291% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.94265232975 223% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.0080342967 48.9658058833 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.363636364 100.406767564 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1818181818 20.6045352989 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.59090909091 5.45110844103 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.543269187085 0.236089414692 230% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.191685772084 0.076458572812 251% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0986878440661 0.0737576698707 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.357825149773 0.150856017488 237% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.022934131199 0.0645574589148 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 11.7677419355 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 58.1214874552 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.1575268817 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 10.9000537634 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 86.8835125448 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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