Some people are always in a hurry to go places and get things done. Other people prefer to take their time and live life at a slower pace. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
some people prefer to live in the fastest pace possible, while others believe by reducing the speed of the life you can have a better experience and feel more relax. low pace has it advantage and disadvantages but I suppose it's more comfortable to an individual to be in normal and slow pace than being speedy. To support my point of view, I will bring some reasons in the following lines.
first of all, nowadays technology made an important influence on the pace on human life. modern life with all the opportunities brought for us, has many unsuitable effect. The internet, smartphones, cars, etc. all are examples of the things that changed the style of living all around the world. my personal example enlights the shadow of this reason. When I started driving to get a license, there was a tutor who was always in hurry. Consequently, he told me about driving in the highways by the must speed of any car, it was really dangerous for someone who is learning to drive. Fortunately it didn't end to a disaster.
Secondly, a recent research explored the effects of the stress on health, this is vital to reduce the stress because it causes a diverse range of diseases such as cancer, heart disease, etc. On the other hand, by fast speed you will experience rough tension in the all moments of your life which is the first reason to changes in brain. For instance, One of my friends who was migrated to the us has changed his job to gain more money, that new work wasn't eligible. Hence, all the time he was with a sense of stress. Finally the stress made him sick and he passed out just after 5 years of doing the mentioned work.
To sum up, I strongly believe, If you want to live in the best quality, the first step is to reduce the pace of life, you should live at any moment and enjoy by tiny interesting happenings. this Idea comes out of the effects of stress on health and also the technology which has made the life faster and faster.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, finally, first, hence, if, really, second, secondly, so, while, for instance, i suppose, such as, first of all, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1603.0 1977.66487455 81% => OK
No of words: 356.0 407.700716846 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.50280898876 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42771231512 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578651685393 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 499.5 618.680645161 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.3711703231 48.9658058833 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.0555555556 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7777777778 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.16666666667 5.45110844103 168% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212281993246 0.236089414692 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0564990950001 0.076458572812 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0596134380451 0.0737576698707 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125097819371 0.150856017488 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0515186342457 0.0645574589148 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.82 10.9000537634 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 86.8835125448 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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