Choosing the best way to learn is the way to success, we need to choose carefully.
So we need to choose between two types of education, learning about many different subjects or only one specific subject? I personally think learning about one subject is way better than learning many subjects.
Today is the world of expertise, if you learn a unique specialty and be the best one on that is much better than knowing too many subjects and be a normal person in those subjects. Consider an employer who need to hire someone for archiving your company documents, there are two candidates, one of them has one unique skill in the area that is needed and has many years of practice in that, the other one know other stuff like programing and skills that aren’t related to archiving and of course less background on this job. The wise choice will be the first applicant for the sake of company.
The second reason is that many students rather focus on one thing that they like the most than many subjects which are not relevant and sometimes learning they are difficult and even annoying. Sometimes students leave education for such difficulties and unpleasant experience or just ignore their courses and only study night before exams therefore this education system may cause incompetent employees on the job.
To conclude universities which focus on one single subject and teach it to students are more efficient than universities with the other system and people enroll in them more often. Graduates from these schools are more successful. They can find better careers more easily and be well known in their jobs since they have better valid information on that one unique subject. Best place for students to learn side subjects are high school and before that.
- Good teachers set challenging task for students. Do you agree or disagree, and why? 60
- Some people argue for a broad university education in which students learn about many different subjects. Others argue for a specialized university education in which students learn only about a specific field of study. Which position do you agree with? U 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 69, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
... two types of education, learning about many different subjects or only one specific subject? ...
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Line 6, column 416, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...cause incompetent employees on the job. To conclude universities which focus on ...
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Line 8, column 374, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: ' the Best'.
Suggestion: The Best
...information on that one unique subject. Best place for students to learn side subjec...
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Line 8, column 407, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to side'
Suggestion: to side
...bject. Best place for students to learn side subjects are high school and before tha...
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Discourse Markers used:
['first', 'if', 'may', 'second', 'so', 'therefore', 'well', 'of course']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.22641509434 0.229887763892 98% => OK
Verbs: 0.172955974843 0.158761421928 109% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0943396226415 0.0866891130778 109% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0691823899371 0.046263068375 150% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0440251572327 0.0685040099705 64% => OK
Prepositions: 0.122641509434 0.118717715034 103% => OK
Participles: 0.0408805031447 0.0351676179071 116% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.45229144543 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0283018867925 0.0309702414327 91% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0754716981132 0.0887237588012 85% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00943396226415 0.0209618222197 45% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0125786163522 0.0139019557991 90% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1779.0 2387.08602151 75% => OK
No of words: 300.0 408.028673835 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.93 5.86048508987 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.48200974243 93% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.32 0.338922669872 94% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.223333333333 0.251872472559 89% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.19 0.174417080927 109% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.11 0.112833075102 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45229144543 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 212.727598566 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546666666667 0.524397521467 104% => OK
Word variations: 56.6743561689 59.2087087015 96% => OK
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6684587814 58% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.5533526081 122% => OK
Sentence length SD: 79.8460323929 48.84282405 163% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.25 120.699889404 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.5533526081 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.666666666667 0.644075263715 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.54480286738 72% => OK
Readability: 47.3333333333 45.7405998639 103% => OK
Elegance: 1.36263736264 1.45489161554 94% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183814085509 0.300154397459 61% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.155958797743 0.103427244359 151% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0799508079968 0.0752933317313 106% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.649147473752 0.497263757937 131% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.184530881767 0.151897553556 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0818495012133 0.114077575197 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0494574755406 0.0781384742642 63% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.23534092493 0.336927656856 70% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0740665977803 0.067059652881 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109270219015 0.210909579961 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.044742475239 0.0618886996521 72% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8870967742 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.86379928315 52% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.91756272401 20% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 8.0 8.42114695341 95% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.4623655914 81% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.75985663082 36% => OK
Total topic words: 11.0 13.6433691756 81% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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