Some people argue that current Social media like T.V news, newspaper and radio provide wrong information. Some people say that the current social media are misleading the people and create problems within the society. Do you agree or disagree?
As the world is expose to several problems, modern media like T.V news , radio and newspaper are expecting to make a contribution for a better society. However, this is not the case in our today media press. Profit making media organizations are only concerned about money rather than people interests. In addition, the press has been presenting news in ways to control audience thoughts. Therefore, I agree that media has played a vital role in misleading the people.
The problem with profit media is that they show people what they want to see rather than discussing social and community problems, in order to make money. People this days want some spice in the news they read or watch irrespectively of the fact that the news is highlighting the proper fact or not. For instance, the T.V media would choose to spend its entire air time to show the weeding of celebrities instead of presenting problems that the general public is facing. No doubt the people want some entertainment through the media press, but the balance has to be maintained between entertainment and news.
Another problem is that the media press has become so strong that it has the power to control how people think. Most of the general public relates itself to opinion presented in the T.V. anchors or newspaper writer. Not only does it mislead them. It also limits their skills to think and analyze. The news captivate people in such a way that it almost becomes impossible to form an individual unbiased opinion about an incident.
It is time that the media realize that there are thing more important than money and control, rather than being selfish, greedy and power hunger, they should be true representation of the people’s voice and opinion.
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Essay evaluation report
As the world is expose to several problems
As the world is exposed to several problems
people interests
people's interests
Sentence: People this days want some spice in the news they read or watch irrespectively of the fact that the news is highlighting the proper fact or not.
Description: A determiner/pronoun, singular is not usually followed by a noun, plural, common
Suggestion: Refer to this and days
It is time that the media realize that there are thing more important
It is time for the media to realize that there are thing more important
Sentence: The news captivate people in such a way that it almost becomes impossible to form an individual unbiased opinion about an incident.
Description: A noun, singular, common is not usually followed by an adjective
Suggestion: Refer to news and captivate
flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 5 2
No. of Words: 296 while No. of Different Words: 161
We are expecting:
No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 21 in 30
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 5 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 15 15
No. of Words: 296 350
No. of Characters: 1400 1500
No. of Different Words: 161 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.148 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.73 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.5 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 95 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 61 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 35 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 25 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 19.733 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.322 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.467 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.337 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.523 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.06 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 65, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: V
...o several problems, modern media like T.V news , radio and newspaper are expectin...
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Line 1, column 71, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ral problems, modern media like T.V news , radio and newspaper are expecting to ma...
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Line 3, column 163, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...roblems, in order to make money. People this days want some spice in the news they r...
^^^^
Line 3, column 321, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: V
...proper fact or not. For instance, the T.V media would choose to spend its entire ...
^
Line 3, column 446, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...instead of presenting problems that the general public is facing. No doubt the people want som...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 125, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...o control how people think. Most of the general public relates itself to opinion presented in ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 50, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'things'?
Suggestion: things
...e that the media realize that there are thing more important than money and control, ...
^^^^^
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'however', 'so', 'therefore', 'as to', 'for instance', 'in addition', 'no doubt']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.277258566978 0.229887763892 121% => OK
Verbs: 0.177570093458 0.158761421928 112% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0623052959502 0.0866891130778 72% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0498442367601 0.046263068375 108% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0467289719626 0.0685040099705 68% => OK
Prepositions: 0.109034267913 0.118717715034 92% => OK
Participles: 0.0436137071651 0.0351676179071 124% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.5658352413 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0373831775701 0.0309702414327 121% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.105919003115 0.0887237588012 119% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00623052959502 0.0209618222197 30% => Some modal verbs wanted.
WH_determiners: 0.00623052959502 0.0139019557991 45% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1733.0 2387.08602151 73% => OK
No of words: 295.0 408.028673835 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.87457627119 5.86048508987 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.48200974243 92% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.335593220339 0.338922669872 99% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.220338983051 0.251872472559 87% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.138983050847 0.174417080927 80% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.108474576271 0.112833075102 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5658352413 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 212.727598566 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55593220339 0.524397521467 106% => OK
Word variations: 57.8832848537 59.2087087015 98% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6684587814 77% => OK
Sentence length: 18.4375 20.5533526081 90% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.3440764915 48.84282405 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.3125 120.699889404 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4375 20.5533526081 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.5625 0.644075263715 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.54480286738 126% => OK
Readability: 40.4713983051 45.7405998639 88% => OK
Elegance: 1.56818181818 1.45489161554 108% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.428785089117 0.300154397459 143% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0889834601809 0.103427244359 86% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0638457533972 0.0752933317313 85% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.516556735444 0.497263757937 104% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.195043927239 0.151897553556 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.166244017172 0.114077575197 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0927287589321 0.0781384742642 119% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.388994553344 0.336927656856 115% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0877213323236 0.067059652881 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.300192639947 0.210909579961 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0548478300088 0.0618886996521 89% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8870967742 50% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.86379928315 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.91756272401 122% => OK
Positive topic words: 5.0 8.42114695341 59% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.4623655914 162% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.75985663082 36% => OK
Total topic words: 10.0 13.6433691756 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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