Some people believe that the best way of learning about life is by listening to the advice of family and friends. Other people believe that the best way of learning about life is through personal experience. Compare the advantages of these two different ways of learning about life. Which do you think is preferable? Use specific examples to support your preference.
Life is like roller coaster ride, every experience and advice are helpful for the learn life. Individual people opinion about how they learn the life, there are many ways to understand the life. I think that experience is we can learn more about the life than advice from friends and family. Here, gives two option and both option has own the advantages which are describe in forthcoming paragraph.
Many benefits to learning about the life by experience. Every experience teach our self about something and we can mould our life with experience. Various types of the experience such as good, bad and so on. bad experience when we can face that time we can learn the how to get off the situation in next time. Experience is we never forgot and it is help for the whole life in any situation. When meet the every new thing in the life we can realize the world concept and how to survive with bad and good situation in the life. One year ago my friend borrow money for 1 week for buy cloth then I was give money to him, after one week I need money in emergency and I said him to give my money back that time he was not given return money so that time I realize the bad situation some time no one could help me.
We can learning about the life with advice of friends and family member it is more advantages. Advice is best option to warn some circumstance and situation to protect our self. It is beneficial when the advice given by the friends and family which is same situation when we face then we have solution and advice to solve out the situation. However, every time of the suggestion and advice of the friend and family does not work because all the life events are not same and some time advice to have worsen result.
I strongly believe that the best ways of learning about life is through person experience. Experience is the best teacher. In life various type of the situation we can learn our life with valuable lesson and it is unforgettable than advic.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 79, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...y experience and advice are helpful for the learn life. Individual people opinion about h...
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Line 1, column 365, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'described'.
Suggestion: described
...option has own the advantages which are describe in forthcoming paragraph. Many benefit...
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Line 2, column 263, Rule ID: THE_HOW[1]
Message: Did you mean 'how'?
Suggestion: how
...when we can face that time we can learn the how to get off the situation in next time. ...
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Line 2, column 665, Rule ID: SAY_TELL[2]
Message: 'Say' cannot be followed by a direct personal object. Did you mean 'told'?
Suggestion: told
...ne week I need money in emergency and I said him to give my money back that time he ...
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Line 3, column 8, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'learn'
Suggestion: learn
...some time no one could help me. We can learning about the life with advice of friends a...
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Line 3, column 102, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'is the best'.
Suggestion: is the best
...ly member it is more advantages. Advice is best option to warn some circumstance and si...
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Line 3, column 499, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'worsened'.
Suggestion: worsened
...e not same and some time advice to have worsen result. I strongly believe that the b...
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Discourse Markers used:
['however', 'if', 'so', 'then', 'i think', 'such as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.266839378238 0.229887763892 116% => OK
Verbs: 0.147668393782 0.158761421928 93% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0699481865285 0.0866891130778 81% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0284974093264 0.046263068375 62% => OK
Pronouns: 0.080310880829 0.0685040099705 117% => OK
Prepositions: 0.113989637306 0.118717715034 96% => OK
Participles: 0.0233160621762 0.0351676179071 66% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.30551632236 2.67179642975 86% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0259067357513 0.0309702414327 84% => OK
Particles: 0.00777202072539 0.00188951952338 411% => OK
Determiners: 0.0932642487047 0.0887237588012 105% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.020725388601 0.0209618222197 99% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0233160621762 0.0139019557991 168% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1968.0 2387.08602151 82% => OK
No of words: 362.0 408.028673835 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4364640884 5.86048508987 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.48200974243 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.234806629834 0.338922669872 69% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.160220994475 0.251872472559 64% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.110497237569 0.174417080927 63% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0828729281768 0.112833075102 73% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30551632236 2.67179642975 86% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 212.727598566 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.42817679558 0.524397521467 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 43.8025702498 59.2087087015 74% => OK
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6684587814 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.1111111111 20.5533526081 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.4968846445 48.84282405 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.333333333 120.699889404 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1111111111 20.5533526081 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.333333333333 0.644075263715 52% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.54480286738 126% => OK
Readability: 36.1332105586 45.7405998639 79% => OK
Elegance: 1.57575757576 1.45489161554 108% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.511054582152 0.300154397459 170% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.13258712258 0.103427244359 128% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0814726949028 0.0752933317313 108% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.558713856316 0.497263757937 112% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.123069530852 0.151897553556 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.240767890884 0.114077575197 211% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.117092867197 0.0781384742642 150% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.407694209974 0.336927656856 121% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0269685481628 0.067059652881 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.400324169974 0.210909579961 190% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.079715053905 0.0618886996521 129% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8870967742 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.86379928315 129% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.91756272401 41% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 8.42114695341 95% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.4623655914 162% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.75985663082 36% => OK
Total topic words: 13.0 13.6433691756 95% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.