Some people believe that the Earth is being harmed (damaged) by human activity. Others feel that human activity makes the Earth a better place to live. What is your opinion? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Earth is the only inhabitable planet in our solar system. Many creatures and life forms have walked the surface of the Earth, yet the most drastic changes were made by humans, and rather this change was to the better or the worst the debate was never settled. In my personal opinion I tend to support the claim that we, humans, have indeed harmed the planet. I feel this way for several reasons.
To begin with, We have sucked all of Earth goods for what started as a necessity and soon turned into greed. In other words humans started mining to extract the hidden treasures like oil and metals as a mean of life to supply their basic needs like shelter but shortly discovered the rarity of such substances and begone using it as a source of financial gain, completely ignoring the fact that what takes days to extract has took decades to form. Draining the planet is not a theory anymore as a matter of fact some metals are facing extinction and that won't be the end of it. For example, the number of forests are reducing and the amount of pollution is dwelling affecting even the quality of life.
Moreover, every single person's behavior is adding to the harm. To be more specific, even our creations from motor vehicles to factories are producing minute effect that has a cumulative hazardous outcome add to that the inexcusable actions of humans like throwing garbage on the roads and in water. Some people even hunt animals for fun, putting the balance of our ecosystem to danger. The worst part of it all that most of the damage is being done due to a mandible error in the human lifestyle that if was corrected awhile ago the planet wouldn't have reach this dying stage, take all the climate extremity that faced this earth throughout the years, like the ice age, and yet the planet has found a way to preserve itself and never reached such a drained phase as it is facing now.
To recapitulate Earth is the fundamental of life and it was made perfect for all living creatures, but sadly humans are causing enough damage now to the planet that is causing a disrupt in the chain of life. And unless we start mending our mistakes and help Earth we will soon find ourselves in danger just like how some animals are facing extinction.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 267, Rule ID: PERSONAL_OPINION_FRIENDSHIP[1]
Message: Use simply 'opinion'.
Suggestion: opinion
...rst the debate was never settled. In my personal opinion I tend to support the claim that we, hu...
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Line 3, column 427, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'taken'.
Suggestion: taken
...act that what takes days to extract has took decades to form. Draining the planet is...
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Line 5, column 24, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...lity of life. Moreover, every single persons behavior is adding to the harm. To be m...
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Line 5, column 541, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wouldn't
... if was corrected awhile ago the planet wouldnt have reach this dying stage, take all t...
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Line 7, column 177, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...amage now to the planet that is causing a disrupt in the chain of life. And unless we sta...
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Line 7, column 353, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...how some animals are facing extinction.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, so, well, while, as to, for example, i feel, as a matter of fact, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1843.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 403.0 407.700716846 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.57320099256 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48049772903 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27402534105 2.67179642975 85% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553349875931 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 589.5 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.1344086022 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 102.668477765 48.9658058833 210% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 131.642857143 100.406767564 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.7857142857 20.6045352989 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.14285714286 5.45110844103 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184174097637 0.236089414692 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.05866072084 0.076458572812 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0255033553457 0.0737576698707 35% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111477189136 0.150856017488 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00858087162876 0.0645574589148 13% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 11.7677419355 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 58.1214874552 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.1575268817 128% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.82 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 86.8835125448 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.0537634409 131% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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