Some people believe that the Earth is being harmed (damaged) by human activity. Others feel that human activity makes the Earth a better place to live. What is your opinion? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Human beings are the entity on the earth, who have the power of thinking and they can use their brain very well. On the earth humans are knowing for much intelligent animal as well they have control on the earth. On that basis of their power, humans are manipulating the earth as for their comfort. I believe that humans are damaging the earth. I have some point to clear this thing, they are as follows.
Humans have tendency to imagine new things and they have a power to create thing which they have imagine. These things are happening since the ancient time. Humans are making the weapons for the survival of them selves from their enemies. Which are very hazardous for the earth for example atomic bomb which is really very hazardous. When in world war two, the first deployed atomic bomb dropped by the america on Japanese city Hiroshima. that time it effected so badly. This explosion wiped out the 90% of city.
As like humans are also researching new things which are most harmful for the environment. humans are inventing new electronic, mechanical devices and improving their functions by this at the last non working devises are become west so these are not degradable bu the harmful for the environment.
Humans are using the chemical reagent for the farm as pesticide, chemical fertilizer for the plant and crops they are not only harmful for the crops but also for the soil. Humans are cutting more of trees and destroying forest in the result global warming has increased as well as increasing industrial area, weapons, vehicles are making so much pollution this causing hole on the ozone layer.
In the end, for welfare of the human being new inventions are important but we should take care of the earth.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...the earth. On that basis of their power, humans are manipulating the earth as for...
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...t but we should take care of the earth.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, really, so, well, as for, for example, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 43.0788530466 58% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 52.1666666667 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1435.0 1977.66487455 73% => OK
No of words: 300.0 407.700716846 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78333333333 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31885747729 2.67179642975 87% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 212.727598566 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.53 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 618.680645161 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 52.5223300674 48.9658058833 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.4117647059 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6470588235 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.94117647059 5.45110844103 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.5376344086 235% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19994679964 0.236089414692 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0851646160066 0.076458572812 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0934772387075 0.0737576698707 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124909893277 0.150856017488 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0644286342827 0.0645574589148 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 11.7677419355 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 86.8835125448 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.