Some people believe that some university student should be required to attend class. Other people believe that going to class should be optional to the student. Which point of view do you agree with? Use specific reason to support to support your answer.
Although some people think that attending in the class should be optional to the student, but I fully disagree with this sentence, Students learn a lot more things than learn from class. In the class students learn from the teacher they can benefit from teacher’s knowledge, also they can interact with their classmate make friends with them.
Some teachers try to draw their student into material discussion and help the them by showing the digital content related to the subject such as movie, picture and documentary to improve student experience about the subject. Sometimes teachers speaks about their experience, it can helps to student to choose correct way in their life path and most of the time it makes the students experienced.
One of the main advantage of the attending in the class is make student sociable, in the class student learns to work with other student. They have to express their idea and also listen to classmate oppose idea about the specific subject on the other hands they have to defend their opinion in the discussion sometimes in my point of view class activity make the characteristic of student more stable(persistence).
The most important advantage of the class attendance improve the responsibility of students about their task that they have to deliver it to teacher as assignment in fixed time. This restrict make student regulated in their future carrier that they plan to work on it.
In conclusion attending in class is full of advantage and make the student sociable, responsible, regulated and also make them more literate about the material by teachers helps. For this reason I believe that attending in the class is not be optional in the university.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 75, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'them'?
Suggestion: the; them
...udent into material discussion and help the them by showing the digital content related ...
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Line 2, column 282, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'help'
Suggestion: help
...s speaks about their experience, it can helps to student to choose correct way in the...
^^^^^
Line 2, column 309, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to correct'
Suggestion: to correct
...ence, it can helps to student to choose correct way in their life path and most of the ...
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Line 4, column 98, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ove the responsibility of students about their task that they have to deliver it ...
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Line 5, column 240, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
...ieve that attending in the class is not be optional in the university.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'if', 'so', 'in conclusion', 'such as', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.250825082508 0.229887763892 109% => OK
Verbs: 0.158415841584 0.158761421928 100% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0759075907591 0.0866891130778 88% => OK
Adverbs: 0.029702970297 0.046263068375 64% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0792079207921 0.0685040099705 116% => OK
Prepositions: 0.155115511551 0.118717715034 131% => OK
Participles: 0.019801980198 0.0351676179071 56% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.73014642686 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Infinitives: 0.042904290429 0.0309702414327 139% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => More particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.102310231023 0.0887237588012 115% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.013201320132 0.0209618222197 63% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0 0.0139019557991 0% => More subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, whom, Whose, That.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1703.0 2387.08602151 71% => OK
No of words: 282.0 408.028673835 69% => More words wanted.
Chars per words: 6.0390070922 5.86048508987 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.48200974243 91% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.336879432624 0.338922669872 99% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.287234042553 0.251872472559 114% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.191489361702 0.174417080927 110% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.117021276596 0.112833075102 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73014642686 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 212.727598566 62% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.468085106383 0.524397521467 89% => OK
Word variations: 44.6940385836 59.2087087015 75% => OK
How many sentences: 10.0 20.6684587814 48% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 28.2 20.5533526081 137% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.019713315 48.84282405 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 170.3 120.699889404 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.2 20.5533526081 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.7 0.644075263715 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.54480286738 90% => OK
Readability: 56.9234042553 45.7405998639 124% => OK
Elegance: 1.59259259259 1.45489161554 109% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.359016424314 0.300154397459 120% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.22046443537 0.103427244359 213% => Sentence is so close to another sentence.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0734553581958 0.0752933317313 98% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.773171307153 0.497263757937 155% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.0843375018036 0.151897553556 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.194310311345 0.114077575197 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.080037460448 0.0781384742642 102% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.382119155735 0.336927656856 113% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.115847814642 0.067059652881 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.235150336837 0.210909579961 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0462107249639 0.0618886996521 75% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8870967742 50% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.86379928315 52% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.91756272401 41% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 6.0 8.42114695341 71% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.4623655914 81% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.75985663082 72% => OK
Total topic words: 10.0 13.6433691756 73% => OK
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Rates: 58.0 out of 100
Scores by essay E-rater: 17.0 Out of 30