Some people believe that university students should be required to attend classes. Others believe that going to classes should be optional for students. Which point of view do you agree?
Some people claim that university's classes should be an obligation for students. However, the others have the opposite opinion. As far as I am concerned, participating in classes should not be an obligation for students. I want to support my opinion in the following essay.
To begin with, the circumstance of a classroom and the gesture of professor is a vital factor to attract a student to participate in a class. Unexciting, uninspiring and unchallenging professors at university make students less fervent to study. In this kind of classes, students prefer to read a guidance textbook and take the exam without participating in class. For example, when I was a student at a university, I had a professor who spoke all the time of the class solely, and there was no discussion among students. But, we must participate in his class because of the university obligation.
Moreover, some of the students will have to take a job while studying just to afford the education. On the other hand, finding a job is not easy for a university student because employers look for full-time workers. It is very difficult for students to handle studying and working at the same time. For example, when my cousin what a university student, she had to work beside her study because of covering the tuition costs. Because it was necessary for her professors to attending classes, she had to work after her classes until midnight. Therefore she was sleepy in the classes and couldn’t concentrate on lessons.
Last but not the least, a university student is usually forced to multi-task. I think optional classes gives more flexibility to students. Students might want to go to the library to get ready for their exam or participating in favorable classes outside the university instead of attending classes which they don't need. For example, I am studying engineering at university and I love to play guitar. But I have to take a part playing guitar because I don't have any time to practice.
To sum it up, I strongly believe that attending classes should be optional for university students.
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- Some people believe that university students should be required to attend classes. Others believe that going to classes should be optional for students. Which point of view do you agree?
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: some
... the university obligation. Moreover, some of the students will have to take a job while ...
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Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...sity student because employers look for full time workers. It is very difficult for stude...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
... work after her classes until midnight. Therefore she was sleepy in the classes and could...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, while, for example, i think, kind of, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1750.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 357.0 407.700716846 88% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90196078431 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90142808993 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 212.727598566 83% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.49299719888 0.524837075471 94% => OK
syllable_count: 565.2 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Interrogative: 2.0 0.994623655914 201% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.2025324827 48.9658058833 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.3333333333 100.406767564 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 5.45110844103 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.350432586702 0.236089414692 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110668336694 0.076458572812 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113414926574 0.0737576698707 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.245600317042 0.150856017488 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.127490240674 0.0645574589148 197% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 11.7677419355 86% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
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Rates: 70.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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