Deciding what the children should do in the absence of their parents is a difficult choice. One may opt for recreational activities or academic work. In my opinion, passing a fun time is more important due to the fact that children should not feel the pressure of study and live happily with their favorite sports.
Children love to play and if they are forced to do otherwise, they will get hurt. School is the best place for a child to study where he can learn with other children feeling a fun environment. Home, where he stays with his parents and parents are busy, is not a suitable place to learn with joy. He will feel alone which will hinder himself concentrating into the study. Forcing a child to devote himself to academic works is a torture. For instance, when I was a child, I always became sad when my parents went for work. I felt alone and to escape the loneliness I played with my toys. In that situation, I had not the mentality to study. The pressure of study may discourage him to take the fun from learning. In the long run, it will create more problems. Losing interest in the academic side may be the most probable consequence. Hence, they should be given the freedom to enjoy themselves.
The thing that a child enjoy most is playing. It can help him not to feel the loneliness which arises due to his busy parents. A child's proper growth is necessary than standing in the first position of his class. If playing paves the way of proper development, then it should get priority over academic work. I can relate it to my childhood. When I was in school, I loved to play football. I loved it more than any other things. My parents did let me play and did not force me to study. It helped me stay fresh. As a result, when my parents were home and not busy, I could easily concentrate into the study.
Even though, having fun and playing games is necessary for a child, the importance of academic work cannot be omitted. There should be a fine line about when to play and when to study. This way the proper growth of a child will be ensured. Moreover, children will be happy to play and stay fresh to study. But if the fine line is not clear and children are only busy playing, that will create problem.
I truly believe that letting the children have their enjoyable time ensures the best use of time when parents are absent. At the same time, I also believe that when parent are home, they should devote to academic work.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, may, moreover, so, then, for instance, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 21.0 9.8082437276 214% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 43.0788530466 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2005.0 1977.66487455 101% => OK
No of words: 451.0 407.700716846 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.44567627494 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60833598836 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36245253922 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.443458980044 0.524837075471 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 624.6 618.680645161 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 19.0 9.59856630824 198% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 32.0 20.6003584229 155% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.8714824697 48.9658058833 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 62.65625 100.406767564 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.09375 20.6045352989 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.9375 5.45110844103 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 11.8709677419 160% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.85842293907 259% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271577991569 0.236089414692 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0613266916452 0.076458572812 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0889009295143 0.0737576698707 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181358089427 0.150856017488 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.125659456723 0.0645574589148 195% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.6 11.7677419355 56% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 58.1214874552 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.1575268817 63% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.94 10.9000537634 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.47 8.01818996416 81% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 86.8835125448 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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