Some people like to buy a piece of technological device
as soon as it is available in the market. Other people
prefer to buy it after it has been adopted by many
people. Which do you prefer?
technology acceleration is quite fast these days. People are eager to learn and use technological advances and to come up with it if possible. While some people believe that tracing market to buy new technology available in the market is effective and interesting. Others claim buying new technology which just came to market is very risky. I personally believe that buying such new devices little after they launched to the market is much logical and affordable. In what follows, I will support my perspective.
The most significant reasons is that people who buy the devices first are the public tester to see the hidden errors and bugs, as a result, the next group of users won't see those bugs while using the device which is more affordable for new users, which they don't need to spend their time again going to the company and ask for another device and explain it's problem. For Instance, when Samsung introduced its new laptop, some specific features did not perform as what was expected. Users who had bought it announced them about some difficulty using the laptop then the company started to resolve the problem and from that time the new users have not seen those particular difficulties.
Another equally important point is that devices could have a higher price when is the first time which is available in the market. Hence, prices will reduce after some time in the market which is beneficial for users to not spend too much money on buying it. Although some prices might not change for a long time this is a possibility for most of the devices in the market. To make this fact clearer, My friend had decided to buy a mobile last year but he had not enough money to spend on it. one year later because new devices and new versions were available, he could buy it at less price which was more affordable for him, to be more clarify the device is exactly the same as the first one which was launched.
To sum up, I strongly believe that buying new devices exactly the time they appear in the market has many disadvantages. This is because to be a first people to use that device will make you in trouble of dealing with many bugs which shows while you using it. In addition, being the first one to buy the device will put you in a situation to pay more money which is not affordable.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Technology
technology acceleration is quite fast these days. ...
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Line 3, column 259, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...re affordable for new users, which they dont need to spend their time again going to...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, if, so, then, while, for instance, in addition, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 11.0286738351 181% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1895.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 412.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.59951456311 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50530610838 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37157038143 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.461165048544 0.524837075471 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 604.8 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.8101109978 48.9658058833 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.470588235 100.406767564 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2352941176 20.6045352989 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.23529411765 5.45110844103 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.293921463852 0.236089414692 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109515019399 0.076458572812 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0753157941996 0.0737576698707 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205944062994 0.150856017488 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0807474199221 0.0645574589148 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 58.1214874552 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.7 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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