Is it prudent to say that visiting same vacation place every time is better than choosing various vacation location ? Two different perspective emerges while evaluating this issue. First perspective affirmates aforementioned question with utmost conviction while other denies its presence cogently. Personally, I have proclivity towards thought that I will be choosing different locations as my vacation spot. Two major reasons behind this are variety of adventures and another is memories.
First and foremost, For me, vacations are not resting place they are places to refresh your mind not body. Our every activity is related to mind. It was said that ind has power to heal even body. New places give us new experience, new memories. This in case of visiting same place for every time is not possible. Although same place has its own advantages like We fell safe. According to me we should force our self in to critical situations to earn memories. Different location will give unique memories. We can share our marvelous adventures either in office or pass it on generations.
Secondly, When we select different location , we get different adventures. Usually we used to visit our farmhouse every year for trip but this year we thought to select new location. This idea was brilliant and gave us adventure of ninth cloud. Out their lot more to not only discover but also watch. Different locations have unique features like In ocean-scuba diving as well as banana riding, On Mount Everest-hiking and thrill of height furthermore visiting forest and watching wild life was one of the milestone of my vacation life. Adventure of hiking and watching coral in deep see We have only one life additionally God has given us wonderful life around us exploring this is like felling blessed.
Last but not least, usually introvert people choose same spot but every people choose to explore more. Hence in conclusion, we can clearly see that all points are in favor of second school of thought. Although risk is their in visiting new places but advantages of new place overcomes this small disadvantage. So it is better to choose new place as vacation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...e place for every time is not possible. Although same place has its own advantages like ...
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Message: This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using 'in my opinion' or 'I think'.
Suggestion: In my opinion; I think
...s its own advantages like We fell safe. According to me we should force our self in to critical...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ondly, When we select different location , we get different adventures. Usually we...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...of hiking and watching coral in deep see We have only one life additionally God h...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...ut every people choose to explore more. Hence in conclusion, we can clearly see that ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, hence, if, second, secondly, so, well, while, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1800.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 355.0 407.700716846 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07042253521 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70645933384 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.554929577465 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 580.5 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.105168548 48.9658058833 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.0 100.406767564 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7916666667 20.6045352989 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25 5.45110844103 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88709677419 225% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193642880896 0.236089414692 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.051388954301 0.076458572812 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0459828148572 0.0737576698707 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117262204719 0.150856017488 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0166018352457 0.0645574589148 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 11.7677419355 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 10.1575268817 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.53 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 86.8835125448 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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