Some people like to keep a record of their own experiences by uploading pictures and other information to social-networking sites. Other people prefer not to create such records Which approach do you prefer, and why? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
This question presents an individual preference of Internet use. Some people enjoy sharing their lives and leaving records online while some rather keep them in mind. As far as I am concerned, my own experience and personality have led me to conclude that not to upload my life online makes me more comfortable.
To begin with, I thought uploading the pictures and information to the social media, such as Facebook, wastes a lot of time. Before uploading, I need to write some content, select pictures and maybe find some hashtag. Take my friends, Mike, for example, he always needs to take a picture and upload on his social media before eating. Every friend gathering, all the friends have done their dishes and he still thinks what to type to describe the picture.
In addition, I will be worried about other's opinion if I upload my life online. Since it will leave the record which every friend can witness it and may last forever, I am afraid of saying something rude or improper, and thus accidently insulting others. For example, When I was in middle school, I did not know a friend failed on exam and post the good grade I got. Then, he grieved deeply about this that time.
Finally and perhaps the most importantly, I truly can not appreciate sharing my life and uploading it to the cloud. I preserve the behavior that put their shining lives online as showing off. For instance, many people only choose to upload the picture that they eat in a fancy restaurant, and make an illusion that they have a wonderful life with abundant social activity. Moreover, many people care about it may want to be like them, so started to purchase the life like this. I am quite bored and tired of constructing an impression of having a colorful life as well as making everyone envy or jealous about me.
Given the reasons above, I firmly will prefer not to create such records on social media. I realize that numerous people are obsessed with it and I respect this behavior. However, I strongly believe it is not the life that I would want to purchase.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Finally,
...grieved deeply about this that time. Finally and perhaps the most importantly, I tru...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, however, if, may, moreover, so, still, then, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, in addition, such as, as well as, i am afraid, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 15.1003584229 33% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 43.0788530466 123% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1698.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 363.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67768595041 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46227368578 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573002754821 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 547.2 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.2534952824 48.9658058833 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.3684210526 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1052631579 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.42105263158 5.45110844103 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244076579633 0.236089414692 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0670136206515 0.076458572812 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0633389492663 0.0737576698707 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132508046361 0.150856017488 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0507505480428 0.0645574589148 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 11.7677419355 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 86.8835125448 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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