Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is often not a good thing for people to move to a new town or country because they lose their old friends. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
Regarding migrating to a new place, different people can have different opinions. Some people argue that it is certainly not a good idea because of the risk of losing the old friends, while others consider trying to live in a brand new place is a good idea. As far as I am concerned, I agree with the former statement that migrating to a new place makes me depressed in most situation, and I will explain why I stand this viewpoint.
To begin with, making new friends sometimes makes me stressful. It is not to say that I have social anxiety, but interacting with other people, especially the strangers, really exhausts me. For example, when I entered a new class in college, I had to manage my behavior properly in order to maintain a nice impression. Also, depression lingered around me when communicating to the strangers or acquaints in class, since I realized them little. I believe I will encounter the similar situation with a harsher condition if I move to others place. Hence, I prefer not to do so if it is not necessary.
Furthermore, it will be pity that lose the connection of old friends. It spends a lot of time to build a relationship. In the meanwhile, relationship need to be maintained, or it will vanish sooner or later. For instance, I moved from country to city for entering the college. Even though I attempted to contact the friends in my hometown frequently initially, I almost lose the connection of them now. We may just meet once or twice a year, owing to the far distance. Sometimes, I miss the old day that we are used to being good friends.
Lastly, when you struggle, old friends are more willing to lend a land. The news friends from new place are more likely to reject, for you are not familiar enough. Just think you are more willing to help a ten-year friend, or a foreign guy who moved here recently. Moreover, it is difficult to make friend in a place with different culture. In this case, people will be forced to handle all the things by themselves. To avoid the helpless situation, I definitely reject to reside in new place without an acceptable reason.
In a nutshell, I firmly believe that migrating to other place is not a good idea, owing to the risks of losing the old friends. It is because the depression I will get from making new friends and I cherish the old relationship. Also, I do not want to trapped into a helpless situation when struggling.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, if, lastly, may, moreover, really, regarding, so, while, for example, for instance, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1974.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 431.0 407.700716846 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.58004640371 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55637350225 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7713973745 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.505800464037 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 620.1 618.680645161 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.3130605019 48.9658058833 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.96 100.406767564 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.24 20.6045352989 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.12 5.45110844103 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.85842293907 285% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255510967888 0.236089414692 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0673731286341 0.076458572812 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0426780334417 0.0737576698707 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142779550303 0.150856017488 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0278039834509 0.0645574589148 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 11.7677419355 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.99 10.9000537634 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 86.8835125448 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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