Some people prefer to ask for advice before making an important decision. Others feel that it is best to make these decisions alone. Which do you prefer?
Give reasons and examples to support your opinion.
In my opinion, I would prefer to ask for advice from others before starting an important work because elders are more experienced and because I don't want to take a risk and repent later for my decision.
To begin with, because our parents or elders have much more experienced than us. In other words, they have likely been through the same situations, so asking for their advice would make a huge difference. For instance, during my freshman year, I was confused about deciding my major. I had a difficult time evaluating and thinking about it and one of my friends suggested me to take advice from my professor, therefore, I took my professor's advice and he could easily solve my problem within a new hour of counseling me. Thus, this example demonstrates an advice from elders or teachers can readily help us.
Secondly, sometimes the decision that we have made would lead him in the wrong path thus, we might regret later on with the same. However, taking a big risk is not worth especially, when it comes to making an big decision. Hence, taking advice and help from our elders or friends can help us create a finer decision. My life is a compelling example of this. When I was in my school, I was having tough time with my math subject, I could not understand, despite trying hard to learns those formulas and methods, so, I was in a dilemma whether to take professional math tutor or to get tuition from my classmate, therefore, my sister advised me to get a professional help for myself as she has been through the same situation. She shared with me that taking help from batchmates might not solve my basic understanding, as a result, I might end up wasting my money. So I took her advice and I got could achieve far better marks on my final exam. Thus this example illustrates how elders can help us lead to better and regretless decisions.
In summation, as far as I am concerned, It is best to take advice from elders because they are more experienced and because they could help us make better decisions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, for instance, as a result, in my opinion, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 61.0 43.0788530466 142% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1670.0 1977.66487455 84% => OK
No of words: 362.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61325966851 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61795683589 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.505524861878 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 527.4 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 79.7090263953 48.9658058833 163% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.333333333 100.406767564 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1333333333 20.6045352989 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.66666666667 5.45110844103 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138282579662 0.236089414692 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0573953407351 0.076458572812 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0605712323733 0.0737576698707 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117553754288 0.150856017488 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0656454637212 0.0645574589148 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 58.1214874552 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 86.8835125448 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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