I agree that people should never make a crucial decision, in a particular situation, by themselves because, often, we lack the appropriate knowledge or experience to act in that situation, we have a limited perspective to make a decision, and sometimes our decision could get effected by our personal bias. In the following passage, I will explore these reasons in detail.
After my graduation, when I got my first internship offer, I rejected it on my own without consulting it with anyone else. Now, I regret about that decision. I had a limited knowledge in my field then and underestimated the opportunity they provided. Soon, after rejecting I was unable to find any offer which even came close to what my first internship offered. They were more than generous about the offer, when they saw my motivation to learn. But unfortunately, it was not for me. So, due to this experience I highly believe in my opinion.
Second, when we make a decision on our own, unconsciously we have a personal bias to it. For instance, recently I started investing my money in stock market. Even I had enough knowledge to make decision on my own, I bought a stock named L&T just because I am from a construction background and admire the work company does. But the experts warned about not investing in that stock because it might tank down in future. And currently I am in loss due to this particular stock. This experience again explains my rationale behind not making decisions alone.
Finally, asking someone to help us out benefits us by their input because different people have different perspective about the same thing. For example, when I was preparing my statement of purpose for the undergraduate application, I thought to write it down on my own and submit. But, when I gave that SOP to few of my professors to proofread it, they found several things that might go wrong. I would have never seen identified it from my perspective but as they themselves had experience to review these types of applications for his own school. they were able to catch it. I definitely think it helped me to improve my application.
In conclusion, due to the mermaid of above reasons I believe we should never do a mistake of making our important decisions by ourselves.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 165, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[4]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'limited knowledge'.
Suggestion: limited knowledge
...ow, I regret about that decision. I had a limited knowledge in my field then and underestimated the...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 409, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...n that stock because it might tank down in future. And currently I am in loss due to this...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 309, Rule ID: TO_TOO[2]
Message: Did you mean 'too'?
Suggestion: too
...n and submit. But, when I gave that SOP to few of my professors to proofread it, t...
^^
Line 7, column 551, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: They
...pes of applications for his own school. they were able to catch it. I definitely thi...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, second, so, then, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 15.1003584229 33% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 79.0 43.0788530466 183% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1875.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 390.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80769230769 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44391917772 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90482493268 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.523076923077 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 602.1 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 59.2262959523 48.9658058833 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.2272727273 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7272727273 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.77272727273 5.45110844103 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.85842293907 259% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135674091271 0.236089414692 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0411989582608 0.076458572812 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0484180581193 0.0737576698707 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0987238528996 0.150856017488 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0569220621956 0.0645574589148 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 11.7677419355 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 86.8835125448 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 165, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[4]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'limited knowledge'.
Suggestion: limited knowledge
...ow, I regret about that decision. I had a limited knowledge in my field then and underestimated the...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 409, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...n that stock because it might tank down in future. And currently I am in loss due to this...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 309, Rule ID: TO_TOO[2]
Message: Did you mean 'too'?
Suggestion: too
...n and submit. But, when I gave that SOP to few of my professors to proofread it, t...
^^
Line 7, column 551, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: They
...pes of applications for his own school. they were able to catch it. I definitely thi...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, second, so, then, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 15.1003584229 33% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 79.0 43.0788530466 183% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1875.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 390.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80769230769 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44391917772 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90482493268 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.523076923077 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 602.1 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 59.2262959523 48.9658058833 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.2272727273 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7272727273 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.77272727273 5.45110844103 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.85842293907 259% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135674091271 0.236089414692 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0411989582608 0.076458572812 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0484180581193 0.0737576698707 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0987238528996 0.150856017488 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0569220621956 0.0645574589148 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 11.7677419355 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 86.8835125448 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.