Since the beginning of civilization until modern times, sleeping enough was the crucial role in each society. The question of “How much hours is enough or when we should get up” always changed person to person. Some people get up early. Some others takes radically different standpoint and say that individual should not sleep more and work hard. I am with second idea and the lines below will shed on light my viewpoint.
The main reason which is coming my mind is that feeling morning. When you get uup early you feel the day. You see the full of sun shine, birds sing and the wind blows. It is like a dream. Needles to say that there is no meal like breakfast. Furthermore, Living in big cities make us so tried but if you get up early, you can able to do extra work or home chores. Take my own experience, I get in the morning then I watch the documentray series. Getting up eraly give chance to do something which I can’t do in the night.
Another important reason which deserve to say some word is healty. Researchs show that It is healty to get up early. According to a research study conducted at MIT, by a reputable team of scientists, it was found that people who gets up early live longer than other. It is eases tension and lowered blood sugar. These people shows mainly optimistic behaviour. They are tend to be hardworkers and do sports.
Lastly, Inaddition to the important other reasons, important characteristics get up early . Scientist and bussiness leader such as Warren Buffet, Nicola Tesla and Bill Gates get up early. Accourding to Bill Gates “there are two important point to be successfull; getting early and working hard.”. Moreover, It is increase creativity and make more concantred persons.
In conlusion, there are numerous reason which can be persuasive enough to corroborate my view. Having analyzed the reason above, one can conlude that waking up brings health, success and happiness.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 137, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...each society. The question of 'How much hours is enough or when we should get u...
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Line 2, column 260, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[1]
Message: You should probably use 'take'.
Suggestion: take
.... Some people get up early. Some others takes radically different standpoint and say ...
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Line 4, column 66, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...coming my mind is that feeling morning. When you get uup early you feel the day. You...
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Line 6, column 147, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... up early. According to a research study conducted at MIT, by a reputable team of...
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Line 6, column 371, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'tended'.
Suggestion: tended
...s mainly optimistic behaviour. They are tend to be hardworkers and do sports. La...
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Line 8, column 90, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
..., important characteristics get up early . Scientist and bussiness leader such as ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, lastly, moreover, second, so, then, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1625.0 1977.66487455 82% => OK
No of words: 334.0 407.700716846 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86526946108 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64144529317 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625748502994 0.524837075471 119% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 618.680645161 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.220341401 48.9658058833 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.0 100.406767564 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.36 20.6045352989 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.6 5.45110844103 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 4.88709677419 266% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.354719134067 0.236089414692 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0879257706605 0.076458572812 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0766369818795 0.0737576698707 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1793823527 0.150856017488 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0630484714515 0.0645574589148 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 11.7677419355 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.37 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.