Some people prefer to get up early in the morning and start the day’s work. Others prefer to get up later in the day and work until late at night. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice.
Since the dawn of humanity, when the sun rises up, most of the people wake up and start their day. Many of companies, universities, schools, the organs of government, and so on, begin their work in the morning and finish it in the afternoon. Thus it stands to reason that most of people prefer to be early birds to do their work on the best time in a day. As well scientists believe that sleep at night is very essential for human's health. Therefor based on following reasons, I prefer to wake up early and be a healthy early bird.
The essence of human life is based on daily activities which are start at the beginning of a day to ending of a night. So it is logical when people wake up early, they can do most of their work on time and they can use their time efficiently. They have enough time for contact their family, their friends, their coworkers, and so on. There is a proverb that say: the early bird catches the worm. It means early rise people are more successful than the other, usually they are happier than others and they are lively in their life. Most of the people who get up later in the day do not feel wholesome and usually they are tired. Owing to their tiredly, they have more mistake in their work than early birds. Although they can do their work until late night, they cannot contact other people well and most of they feel lonely.
In all of the world, health is one of the most important factors for good life. Scientists prove that, sleep at night is vital to perfect life. Our body needs adequate sleep during a night to recovery itself. Interestingly enough, at night in the range of 23:00 to 00:06, innards begin to do their assignment like release the enzymes of digestion, save proteins and vitamins, and so on. Moreover, in the morning air is fresh and it is the best time for workout, run and sport to be healthy. As well our body needs vitamin D for being healthy. Our flesh can adsorb vitamin D from sun light and it is possible during the morning until afternoon. When people get up later in a day they lose a lot of time and their body cannot adsorb enough light to save vitamin D.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 243, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...morning and finish it in the afternoon. Thus it stands to reason that most of people...
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Line 1, column 273, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
...fternoon. Thus it stands to reason that most of people prefer to be early birds to do their wo...
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Line 6, column 4, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...l and most of they feel lonely. In all of the world, health is one of the most import...
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Line 6, column 763, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t adsorb enough light to save vitamin D.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, thus, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1737.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 397.0 407.700716846 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.37531486146 4.8611393121 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46372701284 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.21347669756 2.67179642975 83% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.44080604534 0.524837075471 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 528.3 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.6767925851 48.9658058833 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.7142857143 100.406767564 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9047619048 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.33333333333 5.45110844103 24% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275704239739 0.236089414692 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0882860159948 0.076458572812 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0760894132709 0.0737576698707 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202510714198 0.150856017488 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0791625227695 0.0645574589148 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 11.7677419355 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 58.1214874552 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.12 10.9000537634 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.88 8.01818996416 86% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 86.8835125448 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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