Since the dawn of humanity, human beings have been engaged in a great struggle to find decent and comfortable accommodation. In today’s world, however, there is a heated controversy as to whether one should live in the city or in the country. As far as I am concerned, the advantages of the country life substantially outweigh those of the city life. I have a penchant for the country life for some reasons, among which the issue of health, people, and children’s upbringing are more significant.
This stupendous machine age in which we live, and from which we are just emerging, has taken the soul of human beings. Our cities today are afflicted with such social evils as hypocrisy, dishonesty, and deception so much so that there is no trace of morality among people. Practically, every resident of the city can be considered as cold-blooded, unwelcoming, and soulless robots rather than humans. On the other hand, one can enjoy the company of the righteous, warm-blooded, straightforward, humble people in the country. They have been brought up and inspired by unblemished, flawless, and impeccable nature, so it stands to reason that they are endowed with such positive and charming qualities.
Another privilege of the country life has to do with the physical as well as mental health that one can enjoy there. The tranquility and serenity of the countryside provide its people with the peace and refreshment of mind. In addition, the healthy diet of the people there guarantees their physical health. In contrast, the hectic lifestyle in the city and populations of any kind—noise, visual, and air pollution—make the city rife with stubborn diseases. It may be true that city dwellers have access to state—of—the—art hospitals and experienced doctors they can refer to while feeling unwell, but why should they become sick in the first place to be in desperate need of hospitals and spend the enormous amount of their money on treatment. They can live a healthy, peaceful and economic life in the country, instead.
The proper upbringing of children plays a crucial role in the family and social solidarity of any given society, which is sadly absent in the city. It is claimed that the elites of the society are mainly in the city and can be of great influence as far as ethics and morality are concerned. However, bad environment, improper associate during childhood, as well as exposures to immoralities and corruption that are raging in urban societies cause the youth to have criminal tendencies, leading to juvenile delinquency, disobedience, and anarchy. Those who live in the country, by contrast, can pave the way for a decent upbringing of their offspring thanks to the corruption free atmosphere existing there. Their children law-abiding, docile and well—mannered, which makes the country a utopia for any thoughtful, considerate parent.
In summary, with all this taken into account, I believe that the country rather than the city is the ideal place for living on the grounds that one can live a salubrious life, can bring up their offspring in an excellent fashion, and be with people whose company one enjoys. Let’s get rid of the hustle and bustle of the city life and seek solace in the country.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 188, Rule ID: WHETHER[6]
Message: Can you shorten this phrase to just 'whether', or rephrase the sentence to avoid "as to"?
Suggestion: whether
... however, there is a heated controversy as to whether one should live in the city or in the c...
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Line 8, column 206, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in an excellent fashion" with adverb for "excellent"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ious life, can bring up their offspring in an excellent fashion, and be with people whose company one e...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, so, well, while, as to, in addition, in contrast, in summary, as well as, in the first place, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 26.0 13.8261648746 188% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 74.0 52.1666666667 142% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2724.0 1977.66487455 138% => OK
No of words: 536.0 407.700716846 131% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08208955224 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.81161862636 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03356143629 2.67179642975 114% => OK
Unique words: 273.0 212.727598566 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.509328358209 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 849.6 618.680645161 137% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 9.0 1.86738351254 482% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.1618823117 48.9658058833 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.818181818 100.406767564 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3636363636 20.6045352989 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.40909090909 5.45110844103 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.101982963331 0.236089414692 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0334777911297 0.076458572812 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0343579976777 0.0737576698707 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0631341863468 0.150856017488 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.013204417964 0.0645574589148 20% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 11.7677419355 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 58.1214874552 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.1575268817 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.01818996416 112% => OK
difficult_words: 142.0 86.8835125448 163% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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