Some people prefer to live in a small town. Others prefer to live in a big city. Which place would you prefer to live in? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
“Every coin has two sides”. Living in a big city is brings us toward technology but living in a small town has its benefits. We all know today’s lifestyle is improving day by day also most of the people are coming closer because of technology, cities advancing and also open different opportunities in every field, for example, digital marketing, e-learning education or jobs in different fields. I prefer to live in a big city for several reasons which follow.
Firstly, in any big city, there are educational systems in advance; learning in a different field is not so hard nowadays, e-learning makes a teaching process advance and also it can reach to the individual in the class. Also, in a big city, the job opportunities are open for everyone for business purposes the big cities are good. I prefer to live in a big city because I am working in a company and also simultaneously I learn different courses which will help me to get a good job. Also, the benefits of living in a big city are, to improve lifestyle. Improving lifestyle means that we always connect to the technology also we make ourselves capable to compete with the young generation. And also in big cities, medical facilities are advance, and they give the best medical treatment with high professional doctors.
On the other hand, in a small town, life is very peaceful and less polluted but there is a lack of educational facilities and fewer job opportunities. Also not advance medical facilities. Also in small towns, people face basic problems like electricity and water supply, which rarely seen in big cities. The chances of personality development in small towns less possible because of improper guidance. In a small town doing something different immediately affect on society.
Therefore, I prefer to live in big cities for great opportunities and advance technology.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 259, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...are coming closer because of technology, cities advancing and also open different...
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Line 5, column 152, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...facilities and fewer job opportunities. Also not advance medical facilities. Also in...
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Line 5, column 457, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
...n doing something different immediately affect on society. Therefore, I prefer to live...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, so, therefore, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 43.0788530466 35% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1560.0 1977.66487455 79% => OK
No of words: 312.0 407.700716846 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95084754482 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.538461538462 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 516.6 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.5913955029 48.9658058833 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.5 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.75 5.45110844103 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243655639905 0.236089414692 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0991523163572 0.076458572812 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102546835816 0.0737576698707 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179007366686 0.150856017488 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0482988785178 0.0645574589148 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 11.7677419355 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 58.1214874552 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 86.8835125448 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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