There are myriad facts or considerations which take into that which is more benefits people to use their free time with plan activities or not to make any plan for free time this is up to people the way they find it better. As far as i concerned according to the following reason and from my personal experiences i am of the conviction that plan activities for free time is more benefits. Someone can concisely wight the pros and cons of each side. the reason will be explore in the following essay.
The first exquisite reason which gives adherence to my viewpoint with experiences. know days in people are more busy in their life and they did not have time for their other work then their job so if they did not plan their free time they will miss some import activities my example is best for this, when i start my job i did not get much time as compere the time have before i have job so whenever i get free time from my job i start play my game in computer an spend my free time without any plan then after my free time find out that i have do a lot of work which i can not do in my week days. so after this is start plan my free time which what i do so this process save me from lot of problems like iron my cloths which i forget in my free time and i have did in last mininet.
Apart from the fact mention above one should consider another sublet point metqulosly pretaing to obtain with hug experience. the noteworthy refreshing statestic reveled by recent social research conduct in my country show that majority of people agreed that have a planed activities for free time is help them better to used their time then used it randomly. To shade the light in this issue according to the study in Delhi university have shown that when people used their free time in planed way is make this make help them better to keep track and update their other activity which they wish to do but not have regular time.
Admittedly, someone may have justification on that not to make any plan for their free time is much better then plan like free time is for so people can have rest their mind and not to have any kind of presher on them and they can do their work in about they like but i still affirm with that using free time with plan is much better.
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...g free time with plan is much better.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, so, still, then, apart from, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 64.0 43.0788530466 149% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1823.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 432.0 407.700716846 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.21990740741 4.8611393121 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55901411391 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.15137723259 2.67179642975 81% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.414351851852 0.524837075471 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 586.8 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 9.59856630824 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.6003584229 53% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 39.0 20.1344086022 194% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 130.090242041 48.9658058833 266% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 165.727272727 100.406767564 165% => OK
Words per sentence: 39.2727272727 20.6045352989 191% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.18181818182 5.45110844103 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.5376344086 325% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.48201480146 0.236089414692 204% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.20250578055 0.076458572812 265% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.166931005722 0.0737576698707 226% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.362435351103 0.150856017488 240% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.064490215152 0.0645574589148 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.1 11.7677419355 154% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 58.1214874552 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.1 10.1575268817 159% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.79 10.9000537634 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 86.8835125448 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.6 10.0537634409 175% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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