Some people prefer to take a position in a company and work for the company. Other people think is better to go into business for themselves. Which do you think is better? Give reasons and examples to support your response.
Working for a company or working for yourself
There are always many advantages and disadvantages when you work for yourself; however, I believe that the more you work hard, the more benefits you get. working in a company could be good too even though not all the benefits the company gets will be yours and sometimes it does not matter how hard you work because normally the highest positions are usually occupied by the “boss” closest people.
In the first place, I think that when you work in your own company, you invest your entire time and passion too because to get success will just depend on you, so I would prefer to work for myself, controlling everything and doing all the things right. Another reason is that I can choose my work schedule; for instance, I prefer to work late at night than early in the morning. I could arrive late and stay longer.
In the second place, I believe that working for someone could be frustrating because you cannot choose who you work with and there are people not as compromised with the company as you are, any way you will have to work with them. On the other hand, you are not so stressed all the time because, somehow, you will always be paid. For example, if the company has not sold all the merchandise that was not sold in a month, there will be losses but you do not suffer as your boss because you will get your check no matter what… it is because you have a contract. it is good to start working for a big an important company before having or creating your own business, so you can learn from the mistakes and you will domain how to manage probable problems that would come up.
In brief, working for yourself is better because you will have more control and more benefits than if you decide to work for a company; maybe you will feel frustrated but not all the time because your success will be depending on you and the decisions are yours, not of anyone else.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Working
...u work hard, the more benefits you get. working in a company could be good too even tho...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...hat… it is because you have a contract. it is good to start working for a big an i...
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Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
... all the time because your success will be depending on you and the decisions are yours, not...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, second, so, for example, for instance, i think, in brief, in the first place, in the second place, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 9.8082437276 184% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 43.0788530466 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 52.1666666667 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1596.0 1977.66487455 81% => OK
No of words: 354.0 407.700716846 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.50847457627 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3028195916 2.67179642975 86% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 212.727598566 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.463276836158 0.524837075471 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 489.6 618.680645161 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.6003584229 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 20.1344086022 174% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 75.2292496307 48.9658058833 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 159.6 100.406767564 159% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.4 20.6045352989 172% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.6 5.45110844103 268% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285951009815 0.236089414692 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132603527064 0.076458572812 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0628718804796 0.0737576698707 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203392334777 0.150856017488 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0390549772503 0.0645574589148 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 11.7677419355 149% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.87 58.1214874552 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.1575268817 144% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.47 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 86.8835125448 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 10.002688172 180% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.0537634409 159% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.247311828 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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