Some people prefer to work for themselves or own a business. Others prefer to work for an employer. Would you rather be self-employed, work for someone else, or own a business? Use specific reasons to explain your choice.

Essay topics:

Some people prefer to work for themselves or own a business. Others prefer to work for an employer. Would you rather be self-employed, work for someone else, or own a business? Use specific reasons to explain your choice.

Someone likes to startup because of its potential properties , and another one likes to be employed by a company because of comfortable and stable lives. In my opinion, being self-employed is better than employed for several reasons. I think that owing a business can make you do your best and have a happier mind in work.

The first reason why I prefer working for myself is because of freedom. I am a college student and my major is mechanical engineering. I like to design daily product, like bottle, cup and wallet. Hence, I want to have my own business in order to design what I want to do. If I have a little workshop, I don't have to worry about my boss's opinion because I am my boss of my own. I can focus on the product that are exciting my. I will also devote myself deeply in it for a success. Thus, working for myself can push me to a higher level and make me do my best for this business.

Second, I can choose the coworkers in my favor. Having a good and matched colleague is a key point for being happy in workday. We will spend about eight hours a day in a company with our workers. I want to cooperate friendly, so I want to choose the people who can work and also do the teamwork well. Being a part in a big company, we can determine the people who we cooperate with, but in my business, I can make a decision for that. Hence, I think that owning a business can make work happier due to a better coworker.

To sum up, being self-employed is better than being employed for several reasons above. We will get better success and work happier than working for an employer.

Votes
Average: 6 (1 vote)
This essay topic by users
Post date Users Rates Link to Content
2019-03-22 udayrade1206 73 view
2016-03-31 younes.tatari 60 view
2015-05-20 sophiacct 60 view
Essay Categories
Essays by user sophiacct :

Comments

I can focus on the product that are exciting my.
Description: can you re-write this sentence?

the people who we cooperate with,
the people whom we cooperate with,

flaws:
No. of Words: 302 while No. of Different Words: 143

More sentences varieties wanted. Try to use less pronouns or not to use pronouns (like 'I, They, We...') as the subject of a sentence.

Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 18 in 30
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 2 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 19 15
No. of Words: 302 350
No. of Characters: 1249 1500
No. of Different Words: 143 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.169 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.136 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.39 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 85 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 59 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 27 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 12 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 15.895 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.23 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.632 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.36 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.528 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.151 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5