Some people really like living in a big city some others prefer living in small town . which do you like better?use specific reasons to support
Every person has a dream regarding where to stay in his lifetime. Some people prefer to dwell in great cities while others choose small town areas. In my opinion living in big cities are more preferable . this is due to the fact that big cities have modern facilities for living, better employment opportunities and good schools for children.
First of all cities provide countless ways of commuting. There are excellent transportation system established in cities. This has made transportation fast and easy and people can travel anywhere and everywhere. For example, the bullet train, local tram service and cheap taxi service has enabled people living in cities a comfortable life without any difficulties. Additionally, common man can buy any vehicle and ride through the roadways which makes it easier for him to reach his destination.Hence, the advanced transportation services has made cities an attractive place to live.
Secondly, cities offer exciting job opportunities which draws people. It is mostly in the cities the big establishments grow due to the modern facilities available. As a result many educated graduates would get employment which makes them eventually a resident of big cities. For instance San Francisco being a big city has several multinational companies related to all the field. Likewise, people who needs job with high salary would be drawn to stay in cities. This will further enhance the growth of cities inhabiting many people and serving them.
Finally, when more people come to cities there would be schools emerging. Soon children will attend to best schools in cities. Likewise, as the life is advancing the level of education would also be of high standards. What’s more schools with best staff and performance will be highly competent for the admitting students. This makes cities even more alluring due to the best known education existing.
To conclude, cities provide better employment offers and facilities for life to be easy. Similarly, the schools providing knowledge are also of best standards making cities highly attractive for people than small town.
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Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
No of words: 335.0 407.700716846 82% => More content wanted.
Unique words: 184.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
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To develop better essays, you may have more writing varieties, for example, we found out there are three 'due to....' in this essay. it means you repeat same sentence styles all the time.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 203, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...living in big cities are more preferable . this is due to the fact that big cities...
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Line 1, column 206, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...ing in big cities are more preferable . this is due to the fact that big cities have...
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Line 3, column 497, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Hence
...easier for him to reach his destination.Hence, the advanced transportation services h...
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Line 4, column 165, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...due to the modern facilities available. As a result many educated graduates would ...
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Line 5, column 243, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'with the best'.
Suggestion: with the best
...igh standards. What's more schools with best staff and performance will be highly co...
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Line 6, column 142, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'of the best'.
Suggestion: of the best
...he schools providing knowledge are also of best standards making cities highly attracti...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, hence, if, likewise, regarding, second, secondly, similarly, so, well, while, for example, for instance, as a result, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 43.0788530466 30% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 52.1666666667 65% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1784.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 335.0 407.700716846 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32537313433 4.8611393121 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86184508891 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549253731343 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 549.9 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.3560045291 48.9658058833 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.0909090909 100.406767564 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2272727273 20.6045352989 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.59090909091 5.45110844103 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205195772607 0.236089414692 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0647811488806 0.076458572812 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0690907155258 0.0737576698707 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128019073979 0.150856017488 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.078445004808 0.0645574589148 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 11.7677419355 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.04 10.9000537634 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 86.8835125448 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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