some people say that computers have made life easier and more convenient.Other people say that computers have made life more complex and stressful. What is your opinion? Use specific reasonsand examples to support your answer.
In my belief, computers are proved to be a greatest helper of the age.Without computer technological development is near to impossible. I am of this opinion due to couple of reasons which i will further discuss in my essay.
First and foremost thing, i believe is smart phones which we are using now adays and it is making things easy on our tips fingers.They are miniature computers allowing us to do almost all of the things. For instance video calling, writting documents, taking pictures, recording voices, playing radios and many more things. This is all possible due to computers in our life.
Another reason is i am from medical proffession, an Occupational Therapist.We help disabled persons to lead their life more efficiently.In my field also computers proved to be a boon to Handicapped.They can have Computerized wheelchairs, doors, light swithches, stari climbers and many more things which made their life easy.
Furthermore, computers are great for mundane tedious works.We can maintain all the documents and informations at one place. These days, all of the office\ial works are dependent on computers. If we don't have computer than piles of paper with manual errors will hinder the success of the firrms. Computers give 100% accuracy in accounting provided there is no human errors.
Adding to it, Computer is a medium of prompt connection between distant living people with the help of video calling, so that they can talk personally or professionaly.Now a days as pandemic is prevailing everywhere, computers are amazing medium of education too.ONline education is possible because of computer.
Thinking of all the advantages mentioned above, in my belief computers made life easy.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, so, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 43.0788530466 60% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 52.1666666667 69% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1434.0 1977.66487455 73% => OK
No of words: 273.0 407.700716846 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25274725275 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.48103885553 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06835979156 2.67179642975 115% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.630036630037 0.524837075471 120% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 618.680645161 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 88.0212647918 48.9658058833 180% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.5 100.406767564 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.75 20.6045352989 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.83333333333 5.45110844103 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 17.0 5.5376344086 307% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219227955668 0.236089414692 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0751574659207 0.076458572812 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0516789857916 0.0737576698707 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111325438637 0.150856017488 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0400653141421 0.0645574589148 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 11.7677419355 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 10.9000537634 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.59 8.01818996416 120% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 86.8835125448 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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