In recent days, world has been changing at a tremendous speed with the advent of new technologies and ideas. Also, access of Internet has become readily available to people of all stages. As internet provides a lot of information, a controversial question is often arises regarding the impact of this easy access to information. Many people hold the view that lots of information creates problems. From my perspective I disagree with that view and believe that proper usage of those information would be helpful for everyone. To substantiate my point of view, following paragraphs represent a cursory glance to several compelling reasons.
First and foremost, the main reason I hold this view is that information is the key to success. If we carefully observe, we will find that the people or group that gathers more information dominates over others. Internet provides a convenient way to get information while staying at home. For example, when I decided to attend TOEFL exam, I first searched in Internet to learn question patterns, effective tips and tricks, scoring criteria etc. Thus I came to know detail of TOEFL without attending any workshop or training session, which are expensive and also need to allocate much to time to attend those. And, those information are very helpful to be prepared for exam and now I am confident that I would get a great score in TOEFL.
Another important learning that needs to be discussed here is that information increases a person's ability to present himself / herself more confidently. As we need to meet people regularly in different events, we discuss a lot of things. People who regularly monitors online news and blogs know many things about national and international politics, sports, cultural programs, economical status, and from these information they have better perspective about future days. Thus, in a discussion session, a knowledgeable people like that becomes the center of the group and elucidates his / her audiences with the bunch of information.
Finally, we must admit that wrong information often create misunderstanding or chaos in a society and can lead a person to a danger. But it is our duty, to filter out the fake information from the huge pool of knowledge source. Again, it is the internet where wrong information are corrected too. So, one must find out the correct information and verify authenticity of the source of information.
To sum up, in today's world it is undeniable that knowledge is power and browsing internet is the most efficacious way to get information.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 478, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this information' or 'those informations'?
Suggestion: this information; those informations
...t view and believe that proper usage of those information would be helpful for everyone. To subst...
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Line 3, column 378, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to question'
Suggestion: to question
..., I first searched in Internet to learn question patterns, effective tips and tricks, sc...
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Line 3, column 615, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this information' or 'those informations'?
Suggestion: this information; those informations
...cate much to time to attend those. And, those information are very helpful to be prepared for exa...
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Line 5, column 92, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...ed here is that information increases a persons ability to present himself / herself mo...
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Line 5, column 379, Rule ID: ECONOMICAL_ECONOMIC[1]
Message: Did you mean 'economic' (=connected with economy)?
Suggestion: economic
...al politics, sports, cultural programs, economical status, and from these information they...
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Line 5, column 407, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this information' or 'these informations'?
Suggestion: this information; these informations
...l programs, economical status, and from these information they have better perspective about futu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, regarding, so, then, thus, while, for example, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.0752688172 235% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2141.0 1977.66487455 108% => OK
No of words: 418.0 407.700716846 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12200956938 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52162009685 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94857185154 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 238.0 212.727598566 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569377990431 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 670.5 618.680645161 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.850898191 48.9658058833 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.952380952 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9047619048 20.6045352989 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.14285714286 5.45110844103 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258616236437 0.236089414692 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0764498273374 0.076458572812 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0606369995421 0.0737576698707 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129693717022 0.150856017488 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.078803259554 0.0645574589148 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 11.7677419355 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 86.8835125448 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.