Some people say that the Internet provides people with a lot of valuable information. Others think access to much information creates problems. Which view do you agree with?
When it comes to the issue of a lot of valuable internet information advantage, Some people may agree with this statement and give us sound reasons for their beliefs. On the other hand, some other people might disagree with this idea and have different opinions. Also, those opponents could provide us with strong purposes to support their thoughts. I believe that a lot of internet information is useful and very beneficial because there are so many reasons support my point of view. This short essay will demonstrate some points regarding this issue in the following paragraph:
First of all, in my opinion, it is widely understood that as much as the internet provide many information will increase it is advantage. Nowadays many students depending on the internet in getting the information that they are looking for to complete their assignment. Such students are looking for a unique information in order to get the highest grade. So, a lot of internet information will make it easier for them to find whatever they are looking for.
Another reason why I advocate the attitude of the importance of a lot of internet information is we are in time that every one depending on the internet. The internet now be the basic part of each company, hospital, university and other offices. SO, in order to make the access to the internet more valuable to all these places ‘s employees the internet must contain all the information that may require by anyone work in such places.
Finally it is a well- established fact that recently people not only depend on the internet to search for the information. They improve their skill and get online courses. Additionally, most of the people watch the latest news in the internet. So, the internet should contains a lot of information to cover each human requirement.
From what has been discussed above, we may finally draw a conclusion that says, people who have the opposite idea may have the right to believe in that, but my opinion and other people’s opinions are overwhelming too much to be ignored.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 148, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...this statement and give us sound reasons for their beliefs. On the other hand, so...
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Line 2, column 367, Rule ID: A_LOT_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun internet seems to be countable; consider using: 'a lot of (internet)'.
Suggestion: a lot of (internet)
... support their thoughts. I believe that a lot of internet information is useful and very benefici...
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Line 4, column 91, Rule ID: MANY_FEW_UNCOUNTABLE[2]
Message: Use 'much' or 'little' with uncountable nouns.
Suggestion: much; little
...od that as much as the internet provide many information will increase it is advanta...
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Line 4, column 91, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun information seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much information', 'a good deal of information'.
Suggestion: much information; a good deal of information
...od that as much as the internet provide many information will increase it is advantage. Nowadays...
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Line 4, column 361, Rule ID: A_LOT_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun internet seems to be countable; consider using: 'a lot of (internet)'.
Suggestion: a lot of (internet)
... in order to get the highest grade. So, a lot of internet information will make it easier for the...
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Line 4, column 366, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rder to get the highest grade. So, a lot of internet information will make it eas...
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Line 6, column 65, Rule ID: A_LOT_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun internet seems to be countable; consider using: 'a lot of (internet)'.
Suggestion: a lot of (internet)
...ocate the attitude of the importance of a lot of internet information is we are in time that ever...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...se places 's employees the internet must contain all the information that ma...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Finally,
...uire by anyone work in such places. Finally it is a well- established fact that rec...
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Line 8, column 269, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'should' requires the base form of the verb: 'contain'
Suggestion: contain
...n the internet. So, the internet should contains a lot of information to cover each huma...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'finally', 'first', 'if', 'look', 'may', 'regarding', 'so', 'well', 'first of all', 'in my opinion', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.225388601036 0.229887763892 98% => OK
Verbs: 0.150259067358 0.158761421928 95% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0906735751295 0.0866891130778 105% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0414507772021 0.046263068375 90% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0569948186528 0.0685040099705 83% => OK
Prepositions: 0.108808290155 0.118717715034 92% => OK
Participles: 0.0310880829016 0.0351676179071 88% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.71069936895 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0310880829016 0.0309702414327 100% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.121761658031 0.0887237588012 137% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0284974093264 0.0209618222197 136% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.020725388601 0.0139019557991 149% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2068.0 2387.08602151 87% => OK
No of words: 348.0 408.028673835 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.94252873563 5.86048508987 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.48200974243 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.336206896552 0.338922669872 99% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.272988505747 0.251872472559 108% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.206896551724 0.174417080927 119% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.112068965517 0.112833075102 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71069936895 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.511494252874 0.524397521467 98% => OK
Word variations: 53.9581032195 59.2087087015 91% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6684587814 77% => OK
Sentence length: 21.75 20.5533526081 106% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.6644172138 48.84282405 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.25 120.699889404 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.75 20.5533526081 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.8125 0.644075263715 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.54480286738 180% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 49.0488505747 45.7405998639 107% => OK
Elegance: 1.46875 1.45489161554 101% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.379919521258 0.300154397459 127% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.126531803333 0.103427244359 122% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0864217946702 0.0752933317313 115% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.573015527277 0.497263757937 115% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.179616842758 0.151897553556 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.157214384782 0.114077575197 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0709110067585 0.0781384742642 91% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.377445542068 0.336927656856 112% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.127939271661 0.067059652881 191% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.242298859558 0.210909579961 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0594769766295 0.0618886996521 96% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8870967742 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.86379928315 26% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.91756272401 102% => OK
Positive topic words: 9.0 8.42114695341 107% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.4623655914 41% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 2.75985663082 145% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 13.6433691756 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.