Nowadays, most people around the world have challenges with indicating their emotions. Some people are introverts, and others are extroverts. Some of them could administer their emotions, and some could advent it, and each one has merits and demerits. I prefer to be an extrovert for several reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, introverted persons are more cautious and do not show their emotions as much as extroverted indicate. In addition, they can not trust everyone, so they are exposed less to vulnerability. Neither trust nor mistake. On the other hand, extrovert persons have more connectedness, and maybe they have more trust in other people, so they experience more destructive relations. As the saying goes, trust in people is hard, but trust in no one is harder. My personal experience is a compelling example of this. my sister does not show her emotions and thinks other people may hurt her, so she is almost alone. She has no friends and thinks she could care for herself this way, but I think a fulfilling social life is a form of interpersonal relations with showing emotions.
The second point that I would like to say is that keeping emotions from showing prevents opportunities to know a person's attributes unlike, showing emotions reveal the hidden part of the personality and, others can have a true grasp and recognition of your feeling so, this style of personality, leads to more sustainable friendship.
For instance, one of my friends does not show her emotions, so I can not find out things that she wants, so I can not get across her emotions. Sometimes she becomes upset because I can not understand which behavior is better, and my reaction did not mean disrespect.
In conclusion, each personality has merit and demerit, but I strongly feel that showing emotion is better, and there is nothing worse than not being able to offer our real feelings. This style is a good match with my personality, as well as I have a rather accustomed to this way for most of my life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, second, so, well, for instance, i think, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 52.1666666667 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1689.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 349.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83954154728 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76983269107 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.532951289398 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 520.2 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 9.0 1.86738351254 482% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.8043157962 48.9658058833 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.3529411765 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5294117647 20.6045352989 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.82352941176 5.45110844103 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248648008699 0.236089414692 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0794409048731 0.076458572812 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0728582289766 0.0737576698707 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129956356257 0.150856017488 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.057032205592 0.0645574589148 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 86.8835125448 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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