Some people show their emotions, while other people work hard to keep their emotions from showing. What are the advantages of each type of behavior? Which do you try to do?
Many different people walk on this Earth, and each one of them has experienced many kinds of emotions. However, there are two categories of people : those who show their feelings, and those who don’t. As a person who belongs to the latter category, and knows a lot about keeping her emotions to herself, i can only discuss the behavior of people who show their emotions based on my observations and experiences.
Some people when being overwhelmed with emotions choose to open up and show the way they feel to those around them. And there are, indeed, some benefits of this type of behavior. First of all, if you are full of emotions sharing them with others can make you feel at ease, because you wouldn’t have to carry the weight of the emotions on your own. Second of all, showing your emotions can help other people understand you better. People around you who know how you feel would be able to act accordingly. For instance, if you showed that you feel down , they would try to cheer you up; if you showed that you were happy, they would understand and celebrate with you. I have observed this type of behavior from my friend. As an example, i remember once my friend started acting very strange and trying to distance herself from me. I couldn’t understand her at all, no matter what i tried to do. However, a few weeks later she opened up and showed me that she was really depressed, which not only helped me understand her better, but also made her feel better.
Despite these benefits of showing your emotions, i believe that not showing your emotions is always more helpful. First of all, if you have a problem that causes you the emotion, it is good not to show anyone how you feel, because it will help you deal with the problem easier. And since nobody will be aware of it, you will have an opportunity to solve the problem faster and without having to explain others why is it happening, which could make you focus on the feelings rather than on the solutions. Second of all, if you don’t show your emotions, other people will not be burdened and concerned for you. For instance, i am a very sensitive person and i sometimes feel extremely sad. But i know that if i were to tell my family and friends what i feel , they would be concerned and worried about me and that would make them feel bad as well.
After all, although there are some good benefits coming from showing the way you feel to people, i still prefer trying my best to keep them hidden from the public eye. I believe that this type of behavior is the best for me and suits my personality the best. Thus, i will continue not showing my emotions to those around me.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, first, however, if, really, second, so, still, thus, well, after all, for instance, i feel, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 93.0 43.0788530466 216% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2186.0 1977.66487455 111% => OK
No of words: 484.0 407.700716846 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.51652892562 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.69041575982 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36552981676 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.448347107438 0.524837075471 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 671.4 618.680645161 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 11.0 3.51792114695 313% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 7.0 1.86738351254 375% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.5896334555 48.9658058833 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.3636363636 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.6045352989 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.81818181818 5.45110844103 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.5376344086 217% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.313798948125 0.236089414692 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101192752094 0.076458572812 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0502064642865 0.0737576698707 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195073446168 0.150856017488 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0495691784238 0.0645574589148 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 58.1214874552 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.94 10.9000537634 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.04 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 86.8835125448 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.