Some people spend their entire lives in one place. Other move a number of times throughout their lives, looking for a better job, house, community, or even climate. Which do you prefer: staying in one place or moving in search of another place? Use reasons and specific examples to support your opinion.
Every people wish for the better life. They imagine about what if they could find more money. Actually, everybody is pursuing their dreams. This is the reason behind why some people move many times throughout their life. In contrast, a person that stays only one place in their entire life because they might think that they are in a good place. In my opinion, I prefer staying in one place rather than changing to a new one.
First, I do not have to orient myself to the new environment. When work and life is stable, I could find a time slot for self-development. Within this precious time, I could prepare myself to jump up again from the bottom. However, the most important thing to achieve the plan is discipline. I couldn't postpone my self-development schedule even for a day. When I was a high school student, I had to read a book preparing for the big exam to enter my dream university. At that time, I could not procrastinate even one day. Nowadays, I graduated from the university. If I have not make it seriously at that time, I could not enter and graduate from that famous institute.
Secondly, it depends on the characteristic of a person that how hard she/he can endure work pressure. Throughout my life, I know many types of people. The first is the one who change jobs frequently seeking for the best solution of their life. On the other hand, there are a people who take their time staying in one place. The stereotype of the latter group is that they allows time and problem to pass through themselves. As a result, they build up the immunity to overcome problems and learn to manage pressure from work. For the previous group, they might have strong heart and do not afraid for the next big step or the future path of their life. All in all, no one could answer that which practice is better.
To sum up, everybody are chasing a dream. They just have different path on the stage of life because everyone is not the same. Personally, I love to stay in one place. I love having free time to develop myself. Moreover, staying in one place is not the wrong choice because I could naturally immerse in technical issue when I am growing on my career path.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: EACH_EVERY_NNS[1]
Message: 'Each' and 'every' are used with singular. Did you mean 'all'?
Suggestion: All
Every people wish for the better life. They i...
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Line 3, column 295, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
...ng to achieve the plan is discipline. I couldnt postpone my self-development schedule e...
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Line 3, column 580, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'made'.
Suggestion: made
...ated from the university. If I have not make it seriously at that time, I could not ...
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Line 5, column 373, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'allow'
Suggestion: allow
...eotype of the latter group is that they allows time and problem to pass through themse...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, first, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, in contrast, as a result, in my opinion, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 43.0788530466 123% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1784.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 395.0 407.700716846 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.5164556962 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45809453852 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52314522313 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.524050632911 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 566.1 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 9.59856630824 188% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6003584229 136% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.8188173715 48.9658058833 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 63.7142857143 100.406767564 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.1071428571 20.6045352989 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.67857142857 5.45110844103 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298361472101 0.236089414692 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0812346580523 0.076458572812 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.092526139869 0.0737576698707 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193055345088 0.150856017488 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0969754995736 0.0645574589148 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.9 11.7677419355 59% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 58.1214874552 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.1575268817 63% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.34 10.9000537634 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.21 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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