Many people have feeling that a person who beggars for money is lying or he is going to spend money in something wrong.While many people consider its wrong to give money to beggars, for me giving money to beggars is the least way to help them, for couple reasons.
While many people may undergo financial challenges, many of them may forced to be homeless or have financial problems. Many beggars experienced a traumatic events in their life that made their life changed to the worse. Many of them have been a victims of drug abuse, family separation, medical illness and so on , that made the street or shelters the only place to occupy them. Living with limited financial support (i.e cash assistant) may forced these people to beg for money. This little money may help them to get through their day.
In the other hand, many people may consider giving money to beggars made them more dependable and may made this person to act more violence if they refuse to give him the money. In my opinion, not all beggars consider the same. Make my own judgement will be in my consideration to think if that's person really need the money to buy some food or clothes, or he is an addict who use the money to buy drinks or drug. I think people are smart enough to made a judgement. So to think morally giving money to beggars is the right way to help this person.
In conclusion, although many people consider beg for money by beggars is a bad way, I think giving them a money, morally ,is the least help we can do to give some help.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: While
...going to spend money in something wrong.While many people consider its wrong to give ...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'event'?
Suggestion: event
...s. Many beggars experienced a traumatic events in their life that made their life chan...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a victim' or simply 'victims'?
Suggestion: a victim; victims
...ed to the worse. Many of them have been a victims of drug abuse, family separation, medic...
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Suggestion: ,
...ly separation, medical illness and so on , that made the street or shelters the on...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
...will be in my consideration to think if thats person really need the money to buy som...
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...ay, I think giving them a money, morally ,is the least help we can do to give some...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, really, so, while, i think, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 52.1666666667 65% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1245.0 1977.66487455 63% => OK
No of words: 280.0 407.700716846 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.44642857143 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.48103885553 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26811310957 2.67179642975 85% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 212.727598566 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.496428571429 0.524837075471 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 393.3 618.680645161 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.8165317943 48.9658058833 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.75 100.406767564 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3333333333 20.6045352989 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.41666666667 5.45110844103 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 11.8709677419 25% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.323114588376 0.236089414692 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127347373374 0.076458572812 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0959068765949 0.0737576698707 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.232323541679 0.150856017488 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0849258508379 0.0645574589148 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 58.1214874552 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.83 10.9000537634 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.26 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 86.8835125448 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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