Some people think that the earth is being damaged by human activity . Others believe that human activity makes it a better place to live.
It is important to know that improving our earth and making it a better place is our responsibility. Without the earth, there is no humanity. Some people think that the earth is being damaged by human activity . Others believe that human activity makes it a better place to live.In my view, some human activities harmed our earth for two important reasons.
First, one of the most harmful things to our earth is pollution.some human activities cause pollution to air, water, and soil which require millions of years to replenish .for example, I had a neighbor, who used to throw out his trash in a lake near to his home. this is a kind of water pollution. that is harmful to the earth. So as u can see that , human can cause a great damaging effect to the earth by his activity.
Second, wasting our resources is also can be very harmful to our earth, such as wasting paper, water and wasting electricity . for example, my brother letting the water run while brushing his teeth in the morning and this is can be considered a waste of water , which is one of the most important resource . another example, many of us leave lights and appliances on even we do not need them . this is a waste of electricity .This clearly demonstrates that, our actions have a great impact on our society and on our earth.
in sum, our activities and actions can effect the earth by damaging it . so we all have to work together to make the earth a better place and limit our negative actions that have bad effect to our earth .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, second, so, while, for example, kind of, such as, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 52.1666666667 63% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1237.0 1977.66487455 63% => OK
No of words: 273.0 407.700716846 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.53113553114 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.48103885553 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52580807611 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 212.727598566 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.498168498168 0.524837075471 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 387.9 618.680645161 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.6955012958 48.9658058833 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.3571428571 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.21428571429 5.45110844103 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 5.5376344086 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.363519947483 0.236089414692 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.158916750673 0.076458572812 208% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.201741253855 0.0737576698707 274% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.262622550784 0.150856017488 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.239124366889 0.0645574589148 370% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.99 10.9000537634 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.95 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 86.8835125448 47% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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