Some people think the media (including newspapers，televisions，radio and internet sources) are less concerned with the accuracy of news. some people think the information from the media are becoming incorrect. Do you agree with this opinion or not and explain why?
Nowadays, as the media have become one of the major news resources, whether the information informed by media is becoming incorrect or not has become the top concern of modern citizens. From my perspective, I agree that the media are less concerned with the accuracy of news and the information inform by the media are becoming incorrect based on the following considerations.
First, the eye-catching news would spread more widely and quickly than normal news, although it is incorrect. which I guess is also the major reason why the media editors have incentive to add more nonexistent details to the news in order to capture people's attention. The prime example is the news about the bus accident happening in October 2018, which reported that a bus with 23 passengers crashed into Yangtze river in order to evade a red car driven by a female driver, which went the opposite direction. That report posted a photo of the female driver sitting on the bridge, and attribute all the causes of the accident to the female driver, and it said that if the female driver could obey the traffic regulation, the bus would be safe. At that moment, all the citizens paid attention to this accident and started to reproach this woman in the photo. However, three days later, the video record in the bus showed that it is because the bus driver had a conflict with one passenger, and they fought with each other when driving on the bridge. As a result, the bus was lost control and crashed in to Yangtze river. As for the female driver, she was just passed by. Even though the news is filled with unproved details, it spread so widely that almost every one pay attention to this news. Accordingly, I believe that the media are less concerned with the news accuracy but the popularity of the news.
Second, what should not be ignored is that the cost of making incorrect news is relatively low, at most be criticized by small part of careful citizens for a few days. The same example of the news about the bus accident can be applied here, after the video record has been released, the news center just deleted the former news report and published a new one without further explanations. Of course, its behavior was criticized by the citizens for one or two days, but after that, most of them seemed to forget it. Even though my father, a bus driver, who is very concerned with this accident, after complaining on the obvious fault made by newspaper office, continued to read the news report published by the same newspaper office. What is more, my father and his friends still discussed the accident based on the exciting details provided by the news, which were rejected by the relatives of the bus driver and policemen. All of these indicate that the newspaper office pays little for their exaggerated and incorrect news report. Therefore, I maintain that the media office would not care much about the accuracy of the news but its attraction.
Admittedly, the new implemented regulations might limit the number of fake news of exaggerated news. I have to mention the fact that the elaborated news polished by the editors are hard to distinguish whether it is fake or authenticated, which means the regulations are hard to play a role in maintaining the accuracy of news. So, I would agree that attracting more reader using some exaggerated news or even incorrect news is what the media will do.
In conclusion, based on the analysis above, I am confident to say that media are less concerned with the accuracy of news and the information from the media are becoming incorrect.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, first, however, if, second, so, still, then, therefore, as for, in conclusion, of course, as a result, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 15.1003584229 172% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 21.0 11.0286738351 190% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 80.0 52.1666666667 153% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2938.0 1977.66487455 149% => OK
No of words: 606.0 407.700716846 149% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84818481848 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.96155895361 4.48103885553 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59590206559 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 267.0 212.727598566 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.440594059406 0.524837075471 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 925.2 618.680645161 150% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 10.0 3.08781362007 324% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 20.1344086022 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 75.6246849284 48.9658058833 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.904761905 100.406767564 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.8571428571 20.6045352989 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 5.45110844103 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 14.0 3.85842293907 363% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306319715582 0.236089414692 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102797250493 0.076458572812 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108015644699 0.0737576698707 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.230665586269 0.150856017488 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.11010090528 0.0645574589148 171% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 11.7677419355 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 58.1214874552 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.1575268817 128% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 86.8835125448 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 10.002688172 190% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.0537634409 131% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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