It is often discussed that people in this modern era think that being old is not good. However, some people mention their views that life of old people in this new era is much better than it was in old days. In this essay we will discuss both the views on whether it is appropriate to feel bad or be positive about getting old in this modern age.
Overall, It is necessary to know that when the time comes everybody in this world has to go through different stages of life where we are born, we become adults and get older with time. So, in this modern world people think that if we get old we will lack the potentiality that we had when we were younger but they also don't realize it is good that we are old in this modern era where everything is developed and health facilities are even more improved than it was in the past.
Firstly, It is considered that when we become old it is very bad but people also don't realize that it is the circle of life. Nobody stays young forever everybody has to go through this stage. Mostly, people think that if we get old we will loose our potentiality completely and will not be able to do our daily works due to health issues and mental stress. Due to which people think that it is bad but we should not think in that way rather there are positive sides to these problems.
Secondly, For some people getting old in this modern age is much better than it was in the past. It is because in todays world technology is more advanced and scientist are getting more successful in creating medicines that can cure many diseases that was incurable in the past. Many lives were lost in the past due to lack of medicine and proper health care. Furthermore, today modern world has developed enormously and has made easier to save lives. For example, In the past there were no hospitals and health posts nearby villages they had to travel long distance to treat people but today there are hospitals, ambulance which can take patients anywhere in shorter time to treat any type of illness.
To conclude, I would like to say that it is better that we are getting old in this modern era rather than in the past where it was impossible to treat or cure any diseases. It is much safer today due to advancement of technology and scientific findings.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... had when we were younger but they also dont realize it is good that we are old in t...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...come old it is very bad but people also dont realize that it is the circle of life. ...
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Message: Did you mean 'lose' (= miss, waste, suffer the loss etc.)?
Suggestion: lose
...people think that if we get old we will loose our potentiality completely and will no...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, as to, for example, in short
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 34.0 15.1003584229 225% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 24.0 11.0286738351 218% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 61.0 43.0788530466 142% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1862.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 422.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.41232227488 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53239876712 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26180086048 2.67179642975 85% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.424170616114 0.524837075471 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 596.7 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.8763888733 48.9658058833 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.375 100.406767564 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.375 20.6045352989 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4375 5.45110844103 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.358352920201 0.236089414692 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.136623787792 0.076458572812 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0967325338638 0.0737576698707 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.217408049413 0.150856017488 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0682469583315 0.0645574589148 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 11.7677419355 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 58.1214874552 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.59 10.9000537634 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.28 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 86.8835125448 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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