Some people think that scientist make the most important contribution to society. Others thins that the contribution of artists are most important. Which one do you agree with?
Once someone says that god create human and engineers create others. Like this phrase I whenever I have got choice of importance in society between contribution of art and scientist I would definitely choose scientist because they are creating almost everything. if I keep saying the contribution of scientist it will take lots of time so I will report my own best three reason to support my opinion below.
First of all, I was an engineering class student of science faculty, it means I know almost everything about scientist and what they do, what they study, how long does it take to prove the theory. One thing that I understand that time was if you do your best and study hard everyday you will be good scientist also can be valuable person to surrounders but as long as there are a pros, there are cons too. In many instances, most professors are worked almost 18 hours of a day to let others know about something they do not know. So I can say that they are most important person in their county because spend most of their life to contribution to other.
Secondly, in many years ago people use mails and letters to connect each other who living far away from them, but now as we all know, we just dial numbers and call immediately. This is enormous development, therethrough people do no need to worry someone who is not with them. This is just one example of scientists donation to society. I bet artist donation will not be as this much as scientists.
Last but not least, health is the most important part of lifetime. Moreover only the discovery of scientist makes us live healthier. Everyday there are new kind of medicine discovered to cure the disease. These things give us a chance to live longer and happier without any desease.
In conclusion, if there is no scientist maybe I can not write my essay on computer like this, thus it is clear that contribution of scientist are important in society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, in conclusion, kind of, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1579.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 342.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61695906433 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60278102563 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 212.727598566 93% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576023391813 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 618.680645161 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Interrogative: 2.0 0.994623655914 201% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.1623398187 48.9658058833 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.6875 100.406767564 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.375 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.3125 5.45110844103 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.5376344086 289% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284577618774 0.236089414692 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0827678324909 0.076458572812 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0612845135067 0.0737576698707 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137847314675 0.150856017488 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0406420026431 0.0645574589148 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 11.7677419355 93% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.99 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 86.8835125448 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.